Danni02 Posted March 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 Great update. Loved all the Changelo stuff! And they are going on a date! woohoo. Dont like how Martha is back to judging Charlie. Grrr her! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 Nice long update!Charlie and Angelo were really cute.Shame Martha still can't get past Charlie having a daughter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 COOOL update!!!!!!!!! I especially liked …… “Great. They are all so nice and just, I don’t know, well I know I can tell Nicole anything: she showed that when Xavier asked where my father was in the family picture. She asked me if I was alright which I thought was really sweet. Hannah and Stacey wouldn’t have done that. That’s what I thought” Charlie agreed “But then I have this voice at the back of my head saying that Angelo is no different; he’ll do the same as what Matt did, and Bill and Robert” “I don’t think you should listen to that voice. Or mention it again; because if the wrong person hears that, you’ll be taken away” Ruby smiled. “Can’t a guy just be happy?” “You may as well be, you were dopey yesterday and sneezy the day before that. You’re going through the seven dwarves at the moment” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 You think you're bad at updating? I'm a terrible reviewer ... I am so sorry. Please forgive me ... I can't believe it has taken me so long to read this & review it. Changelo was lovely as per usual of course & you write them so beautifully & perfectly. I loved the characterisation & emotions used there ... & I most certainly look forward to thier date I'm disliking Martha at the moment ... she's being unfair on Charlie & Jack doubting her isn't good either. He needs to believe her. Another amazing update Cally. I really enjoyed that chapter & once again, perfectly & beautifully written. I loved every second of it ... the emotions, the characterisation ... everyone is so spot on which is amazing to read. Well done & I look forward to more, update soon (but there's no need to stress yourself out & rush). Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 13, 2011 Report Share Posted April 13, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it Can't believe how Matt had been such a jerk to Charlie and Ruby! He's so selfish and horrible! Loved Ruby spending time with her friends Liked the Angelo/Charlie date parts Wonder who was the couple at the end?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 13, 2011 Report Share Posted April 13, 2011 Wow!Brilliant update.Loved the chat between Ruby and April, plus Charlie and Angelo's date.Shame Jack's taking that attitude but like that Georgie's sticking up for Charlie.Really shocked that Matt did that to Charlie.Also curious about who that was at the end.Ross and Morag? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 13, 2011 Report Share Posted April 13, 2011 Loved April & Ruby at the beginning - their friendship is just amazing. Charlie & Angelo on their date was just amazing It was so beautiful ... brilliantly written Cally, well done. I wonder who those are at the end though Well done for the update (the really long update) & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 LOVED this !!!!!!! ADORED April & Georgie ..... sooooooo supportive and all !!!! …… ….. and am now even MORE hoping that Matt dies a slow agonising VERY painful death for what he did to Charlie & Ruby !!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rach Loves H&A Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 Great Update!!! Loved Charlie and Angelo's date!! Update Soon!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2011 Fantastic update Cally! Loved the Ruby and April stuff and then all the other stuff with the teens. Ruby has some nice relationships forming! I loved Ruby's defenition of Martha and Jack, it made me giggle! Liked the stuff with Charlie and Georgie too, and I dont like how Jack is acting, grrr him. And then Matt. I cant believe he hit Ruby and then hurt Charlie like that! Aww, I loved Charlie and Angelo's date. Funny and sweet. Cant wait for more, update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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