HighwayUnicorn Posted April 29, 2011 Report Posted April 29, 2011 I still very much dislike Martha ... she is so judgemental! Love Angelo wanting to be there for Charlie too. Another amazing update, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted April 29, 2011 Report Posted April 29, 2011 Amazing update Loved how Angelo wanted to be there for Charlie. He's such a sweetie Grrr at Martha! Update soon xx Quote
carywary Posted April 30, 2011 Report Posted April 30, 2011 Cally!! I was looking for an excuse to not start revising and I came on here and saw I had missed an update You have no idea how happy that made me!! Anyway, loved this update, Angelo is so sweet I hope Charlie does call him while he's away cos I'm sure he'll be thinking about her all day! Martha I really don't like her! I'm glad Jack is standing up to her and telling her to wise up, but I do hope they can sort their problems out. I hope Martha doesn't give in and read the file, cos she'd change her attitude to Charlie, and it would be better if she just stopped judging her and tried to get to know her properly. Loving this! Update soon please Quote
JosieTash Posted May 1, 2011 Report Posted May 1, 2011 LOVED this !!!!! I especially liked …… 1. the chat tween Rubes & Morag that incl this … “I thought me telling people was hard, I can’t even imagine how hard it will be for mum” Ruby replied as she sat at the table “What do you mean ‘telling people was hard’?” Morag asked as she stopped putting the chocolate powder in the cup “I told some friends about Matt and what he did to mum and me and what he took from us” Ruby replied, slightly regretting having told them. “I hope you know what you are doing Ruby. Not another repeat of Lacey, Robbie and Harriet” You mean Stacey, Toby and Hannah” Ruby replied 2. This exchange tween Angelo & Morag “I can’t leave Morag; I’m involved in this now” “Oh? And how exactly are you involved?” Morag asked “Charlie told me about Ruby’s biological father; and how Matt left” “Did she tell you everything to do with Matt?” Angelo shook his head “Then you’re not involved. It’s messy and a very delicate situation Angelo, I know you mean well; god knows I do after the Kelly mess up-“ 3. At least Martha has a reason for the way she is behaving with Charlie “I just don’t get why, Charlie can get herself pregnant at fourteen and have people feeling sorry for her, and I have a pregnancy SCARE at sixteen and I’m called a tramp” Quote
Danni02 Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Posted May 7, 2011 Great update Cally Hopefully Morag is right and Charlie will talk to Leah about stuff because she really needs too, I think. Bottling everything up is doing her no good at all! Mr Lowis.....at first I thought it was Matt looking for Charlie and Ruby, but then Angelo said he hadn't seen the people in the picture, but I guess maybe he just said that to protect them cos he knows how Charlie feels about him. Hmm. Intriguing! Update soon Quote
callyha Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Great update Cally Hopefully Morag is right and Charlie will talk to Leah about stuff because she really needs too, I think. Bottling everything up is doing her no good at all! Mr Lowis.....at first I thought it was Matt looking for Charlie and Ruby, but then Angelo said he hadn't seen the people in the picture, but I guess maybe he just said that to protect them cos he knows how Charlie feels about him. Hmm. Intriguing! Update soon Elementary! lol. should be a detective Danni! Quote
Deano Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Hey, really nice update, I love it. Ruby and Charlie talking about angelo was my fav part Deano Quote
Inactive User Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Great chapter. Liked it Update soon xx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Wow, you write such long updates that I have to read some of it & then take a break to make myself a cuppa tea sometimes (no complaints though). Hmmm, that was very interesting with Mr Lowis. I don't know whether or not to be concerned for Charlie & Ruby's safety at the moment ... Another amazingly written chapter, beautiful characterisation. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Lucii Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Became completely addicted to this! I love it...I hate Martha, loving Changelo and I love the relationship between charlie and ruby!! Update soon pleasee! xx Quote
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