Rach Loves H&A Posted February 19, 2011 Report Posted February 19, 2011 Great Update!!! Loved how Charlie let everything out after bottling it up for so long. I hope they both continue to make new friends who aren't going to judge them before they know them. Update Soon!!!! Quote
Inactive User Posted February 19, 2011 Report Posted February 19, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it Glad Charlie let everything out Update soon xxx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted February 19, 2011 Report Posted February 19, 2011 Another great chapter Cally. Well done. Loved the emotions in it. Beautifully written, great stuff. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
biancaliamca Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 soo good! don't like indi! love dex! please update soon milli xox Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 Nice chapter.Like the way Ruby's fine with people knowing but Charlie isn't.Hope Ruby and Indi manage to move past this, she did seem genuinely apologetic.Looking forward to more! Quote
Danni02 Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Posted February 20, 2011 Great update. Aww Charlie It's good she let it all out, poor Charlie though, and Matt grrr, what did he do?! Dex!! love it lol. If I havent said it before, I love how you write Charlie and Ruby! Its so sweet! Cant wait for more Quote
carywary Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 I loved all of the chuby stuff in this chapter, especially how Charlie helped Ruby to handle the whole Indi situation, and then the school stuff, and the quality time together with pizza and a dvd was lovely too I wish Indi and Ruby could be friends, but who needs Indi when they have Dex to keep them in craic! At least she'll have someone to show her around the place, you're writing him so well, it's just all so...Dex! Looking forward to the next chapter! Quote
JosieTash Posted February 21, 2011 Report Posted February 21, 2011 Coooooooool update …. I especially likes the bits that included ……. "I want it back” Charlie sobbed as she fell into Ruby “I just want it back” AND ”But the girls gym change is where I draw the line” Along with this exachange …… “Ruby Buckton” Charlie said sternly. “Something is bugging you. What is it?” “Charlotte Buckton” Ruby replied in the same tone “Nothing is bugging me” Quote
Chester-Sam Posted February 26, 2011 Report Posted February 26, 2011 I love the Charlie/Ruby relationship, they're quite amusing at times! But damn, what did Matt do? Update soon! Can't wait, - Sam! Quote
Inactive User Posted February 28, 2011 Report Posted February 28, 2011 Great chapter Poor Charlie Can't believe Bill and Robert were horrible to her Loved the Dexter and Ruby parts Update soon xx Quote
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