Danni02 Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Posted March 1, 2011 Amazing update! So much to love about this chapter! I love Dex in this! He's great, made me giggle so much. You really do write him spot on! Loved all his stuff with Ruby. And loved the Charlie and Leah chat. Seems she's been out with some losers! Nice she is able to open up to Leah already! They are going to be great friends. Loved all the stuff at the station too and stuff with Jack, it was just amazing, all of it! And Xavier calling Charlie a chick....made me lol too. Cant wait for more. Update soon Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 1, 2011 Report Posted March 1, 2011 A fantastic chapter as per usual Cally - please do not feel under pressure for constant updates. Honestly, as good as this fic is & as much as we all want of it as readers, do not stress over it. It's hard finding time to fit it all in so don't feel as though you need to update by a certain date. & it sounds like you had a rough week. I hope you had a nice birthday though But of course, amazing emotions, perfect portrayl of characters as always. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Chester-Sam Posted March 1, 2011 Report Posted March 1, 2011 Funny feeling about this "Creepy guy" I absolutely love Dex, he is so adorable Colleen is just.. urgh! Colleen. - Sam. Quote
JosieTash Posted March 1, 2011 Report Posted March 1, 2011 Sooooooo many COOOL moments !!!!! I especially LOVE the scenes that included ..... "Cool" Georige replied, knocking Charlie back slightly as she had never heard the word 'cool' spoken before. Whore? yes, Slut? yes, Cool? never. AND "You're not going to give up on this are you?" Dex shook his head and smiled happily when he saw Ruby move herself, readying herself to tell Dex what happened "If I told you that someone I know is my age, so sixteen, and has a mum who is thirty. What would you say?" Dex blinked a few times as his mouth opened slowly Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 1, 2011 Report Posted March 1, 2011 Brilliant!Loved Watson's reaction to hearing about Ruby and Dexter working out straightaway she was talking about herself.Wonder who the Creepy Man is... Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted March 1, 2011 Report Posted March 1, 2011 Great Update!! Glad Charlie's first day at work went fairly ok and no one had anything to say about her age and Ruby being her daughter, except Colleen but she always sticks her nose in. Loved the chat between Charlie and Leah, I hope they become good friends. Hope to see Angelo in the story at some point! Update Soon!!!! Quote
carywary Posted March 2, 2011 Report Posted March 2, 2011 Wow you've had some week with technology!! Brilliant update, if I could get peace to read it! I've been trying for over half an hour but my phone won't stop going Colleen she will never change! But I did love Jack and Dex's reactions to the young mother thing, I think they're going to prove to be great friends for our two new girls! And Leah too! And Angelo I hope The whore, slut line thing was really good And I loved the ending with Dex writing to stop him thinking! Simply classic! Loving this Cally, please update soon! Quote
Danni02 Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Posted March 6, 2011 Great update! I'm glad Colleen apologised to Charlie for her remarks, and also that Indi and Ruby seemed to sort things out. I loved Nicole and Ruby's chat. It's nice that both Charlie and Ruby are finding people they feel comfortable to confide in, and seem to be building up some great friendships. Hmmmm, wonder who that was watching Charlie!! Interesting! Had to laugh when Charlie and Angelo bumped into each other, again! Hopefully they do again and they can have a proper chat!! Update soon, cant wait for more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 6, 2011 Report Posted March 6, 2011 I loved that chapter Cally. It was amazing. Charlie & Angelo's interaction with each other was brilliant. Ruby & Nicole's friendhsip is great too. Well done Cally. Brillaint stuff. I loved it as per usual. You're writing is awesome, amazing ... you really have improved so much, in terms of dialogue & description. You've clearly worked hard to write this amazingly well. So really well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted March 6, 2011 Report Posted March 6, 2011 Great Update!!! Loved Charlie and Angelo's interaction, maybe next time they won't bump into each other and have a proper chat. Also like the friendship between Ruby and Nicole and that she found someone to confide in why she is so protective of Charlie. Update Soon!!!!! Quote
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