Summer Bay High (by Skykat) - comments

[Adia]

Glad you are continuing ILM! I always read the latest chapters, but sometimes don't have much time to reply. Like everyone else has said - You're a great writer, and I know that there are a few people out there who are inspired by your writing! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

[Corey]

Oh that was just beautiful, It took my breath away.

[Bareenfan]

Oh that was just beautiful, It took my breath away.

I totally agree. That was beautifully written. Your characterization of little Irene is superb and I can see her in my head when I read so clearly because of how you have written her. The emotion and the relationships which you describe is also beautifully described and I felt every bit of it. I am all anticipation about Barry telling Kim. I shall be biting my nails before I even start to read I am sure.

Well done, yet another fantastic chapter.

[chatter box]

I looked in here on the off chance that you had written another chapter and was not disappointed. As ever this was very mature and excellent writing. I live every moment with them and it draws me in; and I adore 11 year old Irene. You understand emotions and human failings so well, not just the ordinary ones, but the complicated ones which screw up lives, such insight is a rare gift. I am looking forward to the next installment very much indeed, but I always do.

[I love music]

**sigh** Looks like I'm the only one reading this again. Nevermind, I'm going to bed.

[I love music]

Well, I know I pretty much ran out of ideas as to how to remove Dani from the main body of the story and so had to ask you to suspend disbelief while Kirsty climbed the drainpipes but I was hoping somebody liked it. **shrugs**

[Bareenfan]

I have been away over the holidays, and only just seen this. I like it.

I always liked Dani, even though she was a spoiled little madam. I think I liked to dislike her if that makes any sense at all, and I liked the relationship with Rhys who was always so over protective it was a cliche. Poor Will, he does have the worst luck with women, and you have captured his emabrassment extremely well , and Dani's disdain at the end. It was always Gypsy with Will and I am glad you have kept it that way.

I hope you had a good christmas. I look forward to reading some more as I always do.

[Corey]

Happy Holidays ILM

Will is one of the guys where the Y chromosome shows why guys are so deficient in so many ways sending a poem you wrote to the love of your life to the new girl, just to **** of the said love of your life, doh and double doh. Rhys always did sneer at all of the boys, I know now why I never liked him. I love Kirsty and Danni being so rebelious, and Danni is sooo much a Princess. I looooooooved Will and Gypsy, so they have to get together by the end please.

Great Chapter , keep them coming. Please. :D

[Zippy]

Excellent, a jolly good read. Dani and will always were a train crash. Good work Ms Music.

[Adia]

LOL! I loved the ending, but poor Will.

Rhys always was quite protective of his family (and usually very over dramatic about it!) and you wrote him just as I remember him. I especially like the depth you are giving to Irene/Kim/Barry. The characters and their backgrounds are so intriguing and so emotional, and you truly write them with grace. It is starting to become my favourite part of the story. I literally gasped when Barry was like, "Right I'm going to tell him..." and Kim was in the doorway!

Can't wait to see what happens next.