I love music Posted June 21, 2009 Report Posted June 21, 2009 AUTHOR'S NOTE: Yes, finally updated! Thanks for your patience. [ Well, I'm reading it anyway! Quote
I love music Posted June 27, 2009 Report Posted June 27, 2009 Does anyone SERIOUSLY want me to continue with this? Only I personally thought the last chapter was pretty poor quality and the fact no one has reviewed in a week backs me up on this. I don't know if the chapter is bad because I couldn't do any writing at all for about three or four weeks (being away on holiday and then computerless) or if I've lost my way with the fic or if it's because I had loads of other stuff to do inbetween writing little bits of it...or if I'm just not as good at writing as I thought I was... The ball's in your court. But please don't reply if you're just being nice or feel sorry for me, I'd rather know the truth. Quote
I love music Posted June 30, 2009 Report Posted June 30, 2009 Does anyone SERIOUSLY want me to continue with this? Only I personally thought the last chapter was pretty poor quality and the fact no one has reviewed in a week backs me up on this. I don't know if the chapter is bad because I couldn't do any writing at all for about three or four weeks (being away on holiday and then computerless) or if I've lost my way with the fic or if it's because I had loads of other stuff to do inbetween writing little bits of it...or if I'm just not as good at writing as I thought I was... The ball's in your court. But please don't reply if you're just being nice or feel sorry for me, I'd rather know the truth. Okay, I guess the answer is no then. To be honest, I've suspected that for a long time. But seeing as I wrote my first H&A fanfic six years ago I think it's well past time I called it a day and concentrated on more original work. If anyone does want to continue reading I have begun the opening paragraph of the next chapter (because I hate leaving stories unfinished) .......... Gypsy Nash never stopped talking. Or singing or dancing. She couldn’t help it. The bright yellow light of the sun that laughingly stole in to wake her each morning drew her to life as though it were her own personal spotlight and the whole world her very own stage. From the age of three or four, sometimes even before the birds had had time to organise conductor and choir for the dawn chorus, Gypsy would fling back the bedclothes and, lisping snatches of nursery rhymes, toddle off to her parents room, where (with difficulty and determination, for she could barely reach it) she would turn the round brass handle, fling the door dramatically open and happily announce, “MOOORRRNNNING!” . ........but I'll be asking for this to be moved to The Vault and anyone who's interested enough can carry on reading later chapters on fanfiction.net. Quote
Eduardo Bearo Posted July 1, 2009 Report Posted July 1, 2009 Its the holiday season - and I have been very busy at work so sorry for not replying earlier. Wherever you decide to continue this I will read it!!! I love it Quote
I love music Posted July 8, 2009 Report Posted July 8, 2009 Its the holiday season - and I have been very busy at work so sorry for not replying earlier. Wherever you decide to continue this I will read it!!! I love it Thank you! I am now a thousand words into the next chapter and in my mind thousands of miles away in Hong Kong when Gypsy Nash is still only eleven. These are the Nashes next door neighbours: Mr Chang and Mrs Chang lived next door with their teenage son and they and the Nashes often babysat for each other when the children were younger. Their offspring no longer needed babysitting these days, Kuan-Yin, more commonly known by his English name of Michael, had turned eighteen, and Tom who was a sensible fourteen-year-old was considered old enough to be trusted to look after his little sister. The Changs were a great deal older than Natalie and Joel, but despite the age difference they had become good friends. Ivy Chang was a small, busy woman who had been born in poverty in a small village in China, her orphaned unmarried mother shunned by all until she stowed away with her baby to Hong Kong where she was eventually taken in by a kindly elderly couple... I'm damned if I know why I have to go into so much detail about the Nashes next door neighbours tho... Quote
I love music Posted July 19, 2009 Report Posted July 19, 2009 For anyone following, 2,500 words into this, could be another week. Quote
I love music Posted July 26, 2009 Report Posted July 26, 2009 I need to edit and add another few paragraphs but should have a Gypsy/Hayley (and a short scene with Irene) chapter ready either today (not sure if I'm going out yet) or in a few more days. Sorry about the delay, it got to be almost 4,000 words... Quote
I love music Posted July 30, 2009 Report Posted July 30, 2009 Just added a new chapter Chapter 42: Runaway Train to fanfiction.net. And of course you can review either here or on fanfiction.net Quote
I love music Posted August 27, 2009 Report Posted August 27, 2009 Oops, sorry, Cassie's cat was originally called Betsy, not Penny! I didn't have time to check back before I posted. Quote
I love music Posted September 6, 2009 Report Posted September 6, 2009 God, I write slooowwwlllyyy, I seem to spend my whole life with writers' block. Never mind, I've almost finished a longish Irene scene and I'm getting an Irene/Barry scene in my head so I should get there ..........eventually......... **uh-oh, watch out, snail overtaking** Quote
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