Jacksthehottest Posted October 10, 2006 Report Posted October 10, 2006 wow i just realised you updated, Thankyou that was great, can't believe Martha and Jack argued again it's all Hayelys fault. I actually like Noah and Kit together. "At the end of the day she looked better than Martha did, she was far more attractive than Kit Hunter and Kim was willing to dump Gypsy for her. Plus it was her party and nobody was going to spoil it for her." wow someone is a bit up themseleves, who does she thinks she is lol Great chapter please update soon Quote
tasha7905 Posted October 10, 2006 Report Posted October 10, 2006 I want to slap her so much, You write bitchy Hayley so well. Poor Cass and Martha they should stand up for themselves. I hope Kit gives Hayley what for, I cant wait to see what happens when Noah and Kit arrive. Hope there is more soon. Quote
ash_mc Posted October 10, 2006 Report Posted October 10, 2006 Haha, I love Hayley! She's such a bitch! You write her so well! She reminds me of a girl I know! lol. Poor Martha! If I was her Jack would have went out the window! :| Another great chapter! Update soon! Quote
I love music Posted October 10, 2006 Report Posted October 10, 2006 The conversation between Martha, Jack and Will was really good, like an actual episode. “Fancy another?” A male voice interrupted her thoughts and she looked up to see Kane Philips in front of her, brandishing a bottle of vodka, an amused smirk on his face. Great dramatic ending to chapter 5! Will knew instantly that he’d said the wrong thing when a bottle of baby pink nail varnish came flying towards his head. He ducked and just managed to avoid it. “Are you crazy?!” “Just get out of my sight before I throw something else and this time I won’t miss!” Will very quickly did as he was told. I was laughing so much at that, I could just picture it! And I reckon things are about to spin right out of control at the party of the year with Kane Phillips as a guest... Quote
SfanS Posted October 11, 2006 Report Posted October 11, 2006 I'm lovin' it!! Oh, Kim is such a puppoy dog ( the bad kind) chasing after Hayley? WHATEVER! Keep him with Gyps!This is gettin'interesting! Quote
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted October 13, 2006 Report Posted October 13, 2006 Brilliant Sky! Gypsy cracked me up! How I miss her! Quote
SfanS Posted October 13, 2006 Report Posted October 13, 2006 brilliant!! Hayley is such a cow. No, that's an insult to cows! (LOL, sound familiar?) Ohhh, PLEASE update as soon as possible!!!! Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted October 13, 2006 Report Posted October 13, 2006 That was excellent and i thought it was impossible to hate Hayley even more, guess i was wrong. Fab Chapter please update soon Quote
tasha7905 Posted October 13, 2006 Report Posted October 13, 2006 Great chapter. Hayley is so sly, I hope none of her plans work. Cant wait for more. Quote
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