A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action (by Miranda) - comments

[Miranda]

Thanks everyone, you are so encouraging and nice Yes, Red, poor old Ruby is not showing her best side in this fic, is she?

Oh, how I wish Romeo would really say that to Heath onscreen, I think I'd explode laughing!

Edited March 21, 2011 by Miranda

[Miranda]

Well, I really fell out of love with this story, due to Romeo being such a ****wit lately, but as Zetti dedicated her chapter to me, I shall dedicate the next one to her

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another great chapter. Amazingly written.

Really well done.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

Aw thanks for the dedication, appreciate it x

Loving Casey/Romeo 'If you get lucky' such a cute fangirl moment for me!

Ooops what Casey gonna do about Nicole

[lozlovesh&a]

Loved it. Continue pls.

[Red Ranger 1]

Ha!Nice update.Xavier's reaction to Romeo being gay made me laugh.Nice little cameos from the rest of the Bay residents.I was a bit worried when the River Boys turned up but they seemed to just leave it.Wonder what's going to happen with Nicole.

[Miranda]

Thanks guys, you are troopers carrying on following my story. There are three chapters left and you will see more of the other characters mentioned in that chapter....

Red, I loved writing that bit with Xavier's reaction! Knowing how clumsy and affectionate Xavier can be, I think he wanted to hug Romeo but didn't want to start people talking so he shook his hand instead

Zetti, it occurred to me how cheeky Casey is being. He snogs Romeo in front of Nicole to tell her to back off, then he sits in church holding her hand for hours, hm....

[Zetti]

Well I really want more cheeky Casey please! And your doing really well with the chapters, am gonna miss the fic when it does finish

[Jen]

I can't just quote back the whole thing, because that would be a bit redundant. But, this is so good. I like how in the last chapter we got glimpses of other characters. I'm assuming not all of them know about the extent of Romeo and Casey's relationship.

“I turned both Romeo and Casey gay? Oh my god.”

Ruby. Just stop. It’s not about you.

Romeo folded his arms and glared at Heath, like Superman at Lex Luthor. Casey half expected him to levitate six inches off the ground, like the Man of Steel was fond of doing.

Hello SuperHero-AU that I want. Can we just have a fic of all the teens with superpowers? That would be awesome.

“I think you’re suppressing your own passionate feelings for me, that’s why you’re acting out your aggression.” Romeo hadn’t studied psychology for nothing.

Why is it that I like Romeo best when he’s answering back and being sassy?

They both stepped forward at the same time and kissed, tongues and teeth clashing in their urgency. Romeo’s fingers twined in Casey’s hair, his other hand was under his jacket, stroking his back, pressing their bodies together. Casey had both his arms round Romeo’s neck. He moved his hands down over his shoulders and pulled off his awkward, starched jacket. Then Romeo did the same to him, ripping his shirt off too, so roughly that a couple of the buttons flew off. They carried on kissing, Casey’s naked skin making Romeo’s chest hot under his shirt.

Casey pushed him onto the bed, then shoved him onto his back and undid his shirt. He lay half on top of him, kissing his lips, jaw, neck and down his chest. Romeo arched his back a little in pleasure, just letting it happen. Casey slowly kissed and licked his way down his body, all over the tanned well-defined muscles. Romeo sneaked a look at the dark head moving down him and thought… Actually he didn’t think anything, he could only feel by that stage. He groaned, making Casey smile to himself. He liked that sound. He wanted to make Romeo feel good in whatever way he could, and slowly ran his tongue down to his navel, torturing him by taking forever.

UNF. I have no words. I’m just this puddle on the floor because I have melted in all the hotness. Favouritist of favourites! I just ... can’t even. Amazing.

“Get over yourself, Braxton.”

There can never be enough of Sassy-Romeo.

“It’s from Star Wars. I’m just joking, sorry. I’m still your friend, whoever you sleep with.”

Xavier, you win at everything for that reference. He has never really been a favourite of mine, but, falling for him as I’m reading this fic. Just thought you should know.

[Miranda]

Well, I wasn't allowed to put as many smileys in this message as I wanted, the board kept telling me off!

Oh, thanks Jen, your comments mean such a lot, with all your quotes. Its massively flattering, I'm glad you and all the other brilliant supportive readers are enjoying this fic Soon I shall be so bigheaded, I shan't fit through the door!

Yes, Ruby, isn't she self absorbed, dear oh dear. I can just imagine her thinking/ saying that if Casey/Romeo really happened...

Romeo is a bit like superman, physically I mean. I can't imagine how he gets his muscles like that

“I think you’re suppressing your own passionate feelings for me, that’s why you’re acting out your aggression.” Romeo hadn’t studied psychology for nothing.

I think this is my favourite line I've ever written, ever. If only he'd really say that to Heath onscreen, if only

UNF. I have no words. I’m just this puddle on the floor because I have melted in all the hotness. Favouritist of favourites! I just ... can’t even. Amazing.

Oh, now I'm worried I won't write anything hotter, in fact that is probably the hottest scene in the story, I think See what you think of future chapters. But I'm glad you dissolved satisfactorily....!

“Get over yourself, Braxton.”

There can never be enough of Sassy-Romeo.

A very wise man said to me recently, we can redeem boring/ horrible characters in our fanfics if we want to, so I am following his advice.

“It’s from Star Wars. I’m just joking, sorry. I’m still your friend, whoever you sleep with.”

Xavier, you win at everything for that reference. He has never really been a favourite of mine, but, falling for him as I’m reading this fic. Just thought you should know.

I'm getting more and more fond of Xavier these days. He at least does something in life, instead of faffing around like Unsassy Romeo.

Three more chapters to go....