A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action (by Miranda) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another great chapter The emotions (especially Nicole's) were written perfectly, spot on.

& everything she said was so like her & so in character. For her to have Aden's baby would have been ideal.

But because I'm an Adelle fan (& I wouldn't have minded if Nicole & Aden were together after he grieved for Belle for a suitable time), thank you for writing ;

“I’m sure he did love you, it was just too soon after Belle."

That really fitted & was so perfect for me I couldn't agree with that statement more.

Indi & Nicole's chat was beautifully written though.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

“I’ll go first, you come out later.”

“Hm, I think I’ve done that already.”

Hehehe love the reference

“Yes, I had Rubes moaning about them earlier. She is shocked, she thinks its gross, but I reckon its cos neither of them like her best,” Nicole giggled. “It’s a bit of an insult really isn’t it? Your two ex-boyfriends liking each other more than you. In my case it would be Geoff and Aden.”

Indy giggled. “I can’t imagine Geoff and Aden getting it on! But Romeo looks… content… these days, doesn’t he?”

Love this line, totally makes me smile after all the Gaden fics on here!

I love this chapter.. but I do want some more sexual content please

Update soon x

[Miranda]

Gosh, Carina and Zetti, thanks for such quick replies

I'm glad you are happy about Nicole/Aden, Carina. I wish they could have ended up with a baby like that too, and it wasn't Penn's. I like Nicole, she's one of my favourite characters.

Yes, those lines were just a little affectionate dig at Gaden

Stop making sexual demands, Zetti You're making me anxious

Edited March 24, 2011 by Miranda

[Zetti]

Well if you give in this time then I wont say anymore about it

[Miranda]

PMSL

[lozlovesh&a]

Mink! I wish she would come back. Loved it.. Dark cupboard.. Lol. Continue please.

[Miranda]

Thank you Loz. I think Mink should come back to the series too. I've just decided that. She could sweep Xave off his feet and talk some sense into Romeo. If that's possible...

[Red Ranger 1]

I loved Nicole's chat about Aden, the Naden fan in me can't help wondering if it's going anywhere... And Mink!Even though you asked me about her, I wasn't expecting her to turn up.Great chapter, really looking forward to seeing where it goes.

[Jen]

“It’s a bit of an insult really isn’t it? Your two ex-boyfriends liking each other more than you. In my case it would be Geoff and Aden.”

Indy giggled. “I can’t imagine Geoff and Aden getting it on!

Why are you doing this to me? You know I'm co-captaining the Geoff/Aden ship. Can we have a Casey/Romeo/Geoff/Aden foursome, or is that taking things too far? Regardless, I appreciate the token mention .

“I’ll go first, you come out later.”

“Hm, I think I’ve done that already.”

Coming out jokes will never not be funny .

Surprise return of Mink. Can't wait to see what she wants.

[Miranda]

“It’s a bit of an insult really isn’t it? Your two ex-boyfriends liking each other more than you. In my case it would be Geoff and Aden.”

Indy giggled. “I can’t imagine Geoff and Aden getting it on!

Why are you doing this to me? You know I'm co-captaining the Geoff/Aden ship. Can we have a Casey/Romeo/Geoff/Aden foursome, or is that taking things too far? Regardless, I appreciate the token mention .

I just nearly fell off my chair laughing at that. I think writing this fic is making me hysterical, I need a cold shower hahahahaha.