Missing Heart (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Loved Ella in that chapter. & just Rola in general.

An amaizng update Tele. Really well done.

Perfect, beautifully written & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[pollymoon]

Brilliant Tele, hate to see these two fight but it always amazes me how they still end up in each other's arms, I so love ROLA, I really hope that they will all stay safe xx

[Zetti]

I adore the way they fight but they just end up in bed together, it is so adorable.

The interaction between Roman/Ella & George was spot on

I have no idea what you were worried about though, it was written fantastically, well worth the wait. I look forward to more (I think ) xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

Er ... you were worried about this chapter? I know you didn't want to write it (& I'm not going to repeat what I said to you over the phone) but really, you were worried about posting it? It was perfect. Rola I just love them. <sighs> You wrote it beautifully, Tele. Really amazing, well done. I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

First comment!

Aww...the kids really don't want to go but I like the way that Rola stuck to their decision despite the fact that neither of them want this.

& I know I always say this but it was awesomely written as always & I look forward to more

Edited August 14, 2011 by Zetti

[pollymoon]

just brilliant tele, was expecting them to react that way but it has to be done, I think georgie may talk them round to why roman and ella are doing this, I just love this story and once again tele, so well written, just brilliant xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

Okay, finally commenting. & it took a lot of effort just to sign in ...

I can never think of anything else to say other than Rola I feel sorry for the children but it is the right decision.

Right, well I would say update soon but I can't really seeing as it took me so long to comment. But I look forward to more.

Another great chapter, well done.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

Uhoh..Alexi...trouble looms...

Actually, now thinking about he decided that he wasn’t going to be giving Steve such a hard time for dating his daughter after all, the poor guy needed a break.

I couldnt stop laughing at that line

& this bit

“Really, so you really don’t mind that we’ll never have sex again?”

Roman stopped and looked at her.

“You know that you’ve threatened me with that before.” He said.

She narrowed her eyes and glared at him without speaking.

“Which of course makes me all the more grateful you haven’t followed through on that threat, dear” he murmured.

Classic Rola

I loved the update & looking forward to more

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another brilliant update, Tele.

And I would have commented earlier but I haven't been online on BttB all day ...

And I have sort of been sulking and jealous of everyone who saw the Arctic Monkeys last night so have stayed in my pj's all day (lazy, I know) and watched highlights.

But I'm here now to comment ... so I'll get on with it ...

Only wanting the argument if they can have make up sex afterwards ... makes a lot of sense.

And I'm pretty sure Alexi is going to cause a lot of trouble for them now too. Great < That's sarcasm by the way so please make sure nothing happens to Ella, Roman, the kids ...

And once again, just Rola

I loved that update and I look forward to more.

Love Carina

xxx

[ldscott]

Tele, I know I have been a bad reader but i've just got back from a trip and am now all caught up with your chapters- please forgive me for missing so much!

Great chapters as allways! Worried about what is gona happen now Alexi is in the fic, and interested in what the surprise the kids have got for Ella. Please don;t let Xmas be ruined!

Can't wait to read more

Lisa x