Zetti Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 She wondered if they knew how rich she was and could probably outbid their employer. A quick half shake of Roman’s head made her lips twitch as she fought the urge to smile. He’d known she was thinking that exact thing and had told her silently not to try anything. God, her husband was annoying when he got inside her head. This is Rola we are talking about, of course they understand each other perfectly well, its adorable Alexi! Kill him already...he's annoying...and I dont want Mike or Danni to be hurt.... Hope you update soon Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
pembie Posted December 14, 2011 Report Posted December 14, 2011 Oh I was not expecting Rola, Colleen and Leah to be taken hostage in the diner quite a shocker there. I really enjoyed that chapter. You write the tension perfectly and it has me hooked. Quote
Zetti Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 Alexi! I hate him, I really do, he is an ass and he deserves to die a painful death, he should keep his hands to himself!!! I, Zetti, GIVE Roman Harris the permission to borrow my shotgun and shoot Alexi's head off! I demand a long and painful death for Alexi and his men..and Rola to have a ringside seat because he does not deserve a quick death! On the other hand..I am curious to know who is about to enter the diner..not my Mike because then I will come with my baseball bat...I promise I will!! So we understand each other, Alexi to die and Mike to live..good! :wink: & on a final note, great update and well written, I hope you dont make us wait too long for the next chapter... x Quote
pollymoon Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 oh tele, what an update, alexi is such an evil man and i really hope that Roman gets him, who has come in the door, just brilliant and yes I am going to beg again for another update really soon please, just can't wait to see what happens next, just brilliant. xxxxx Quote
pembie Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 Alexi is a right evil little turd isnt he Althrough he is meant to be the character we hate and rightly so. I like the tenison and drama he brings to this story. The mind boggles at who could be coming through the door at the end. hopefully they won't be hurt in anyway. I'm thinking they might get shot maybe as they walk inside the diner. Anyway can't wait for more. Quote
pollymoon Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 Oh my god tele, this is just getting better and better and the supense is killing me, and they got lily, she seems to be giving as good as she gets though, just loving these updates, can't wait to see what happens next, brilliant xxxxxxx Quote
pembie Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 I didn't expect the person at the diner door to be Mike I thought it was going to be Miles for some reason I don't know why WOW at Jack is working undercover. wonder if his and Roman's plan goes right. I hope so. Oh no Lilly is in the hostage situation I hope she's not hurt and gets away safe I really do. I was bit shocked to see Danni again I really thought she could of been killed when Mike was caught. Great stuff. Quote
Zetti Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 Mike! My poor Mike..stop hurting him! & Lily! She saw him lifting his hand and striking the guard who hadn’t been able to control Lily. Was it wrong to sympathise with him, she wondered with ironic humour although he’d only had Lily for a few hours she had her full time. Hehe That had to be the funniest line in that chapter! She glared at him and then at Roman, her eyes promising him they would be talking later before she snatched the first aid kit and spun around marching out of the kitchen. “So that is Ella.” Jack said slowly. “And you think I’m scared of Alexi?” Roman shot back in a quiet voice. “When I have to go home and deal with that.” Jack?! You brought Jack back! Yayy I love Jack..and I hope Jack is part of Alexi's comedown..and his painful death! & finally, thankyou! Two updates in one day?! Thanks! Looking forward to more Tele! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 19, 2011 Report Posted December 19, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
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