Zetti Posted February 7, 2012 Report Posted February 7, 2012 (edited) Ah that was a good chapter. Poor Roman, clearly not coping with the aftermath of Alexi's death and the aftermath of his actions which led to it...but however Alexi deserved it! So please fix it and update soon Well Done Tele xx Edited February 7, 2012 by Zetti Quote
pembie Posted February 8, 2012 Report Posted February 8, 2012 Ah so Roman is finding tough with killing Alexi. it must be tough for him. I hope he doesn't shut out his famliy hopefully he won't. Had to smile at Liam acting all macho and telling his story of how he to protected the babies very brave. Good Chapter Look Forward to more. Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Chapter Seven of my story "Debated Heart" has now been posted on my blog. And if you check it out, why not have a read of "Dante's Choice"... and I love comments... oh yeah... And expect an update to this story too in the next couple of days... Love Tele xx Quote
Zetti Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 That was not fluff. but it was well written.. Poor Ella.. please don't make it too bad.. Hope you update soon.. x Quote
pembie Posted February 11, 2012 Report Posted February 11, 2012 Oh dear I can sense serious trouble on the way for them both after that chapter. I have a feeling it might be the start of the idea you told me about a while back. Liked how Roman doesn't realise how broken they really are. Thinking Ella's just upset about her smashed up possessions, But for Ella the damage goes much deeper. Hope that makes sense Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted February 11, 2012 Report Posted February 11, 2012 Oh dear I can sense serious trouble on the way for them both after that chapter. I have a feeling it might be the start of the idea you told me about a while back. Liked how Roman doesn't realise how broken they really are. Thinking Ella's just upset about her smashed up possessions, But for Ella the damage goes much deeper. Hope that makes sense yup! It made sense... and yes... there is trouble brewing... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
pollymoon Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 (edited) Another great chapter Tele and now it seems the trouble starts, I hope they can work through this, can't wait for more, xx Edited February 13, 2012 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
pembie Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 I found that chapter quite amusing. I loved Roman and Ella's chat about the chilli and the way Roman it had a slight naughty edge too it. I have it admit it when Roman just came out they would be needing more condoms. I thought I had read it wrong at first I actally said you what, and I had to read it again. that part was very funny. Quote
pollymoon Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Another great part tele, have missed this, love the way they turn talks of cooking in to something else, love this story, can't wait for more. xxxxxxx Quote
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