Missing Heart (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[pollymoon]

Tele, that was just brilliant, a great Roman and Ella part, just like the old days and Lily is just brilliant, just so love reading happy and in love Roman and Ella, more soon please. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[Inactive User]

Brilliant chapter, Tele Update soon

[pembie]

Oh man poor Lilly having that clever little trick played on her, thinking she had to go to school. Very funny Even more as she is too full to eat her sweets because of the ice cream. It looks like its going be a fun day out on the beach for the family.

Update again soon.

[pollymoon]

Brilliant Tele, love these parts all happy families, question is though, will it last, more soon please xxxxxxxx

[Zetti]

Squeeeeeeeeeeeee! Lily is just so completely & utterly adorable!

However like pollymoon I don't think it's going to last

Hope you update more soon

[Inactive User]

Brilliant update Lily is so adorable! Update soon xx

[Inactive User]

Awesome chapter Roman and Ella-so cute at the end Update soon

[pollymoon]

Brilliant Tele, really loved this part, the kids with Roman was so sad but so moving, is Roman going to regret going to a estate agents, brilliant as always, more again soon please, xxxxxxxxx

[Zetti]

Wow sad rola makes my heart hurt but there has to be light at the end of the tunnel..

Edited November 22, 2012 by Zetti

[Zetti]

Missing his heart that line is perfect! It just sums up Rola!

They are such a fiery and passionate couple and it genuinely breaks my heart to see it fall apart. Even though I knew it was going to happen it still breaks my heart to read it. To see them as a shadow of their former selves. However you have put them through so much so there has to be light at the end of the tunnel. I loved the story and I look forward to more of your writing! Still can't believe this was the first Rola story I read and from then I became a Rola addict! All because of your writing. You should be proud of yourself and the story. I know I am! Well done!