Red Ranger 1 Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Posted April 19, 2011 Intrigued to know what will happen when Casey goes to see Steve.Looking forward to more of this. Quote
Miranda Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 Aha, the two plots are starting to come together I just love this story, all the characters are their best selves and its full of intrigue too. Don't blame you for writing the story before you post it. I usually do too, I have to get it straight in my head before I post it Quote
Miranda Posted April 21, 2011 Report Posted April 21, 2011 :o Either I'm stupid or that was a big shock of Steve being their father! Yikes! That was the best chapter so far in my opinion. I suspect in the series that Brax, Heath and Casey have different fathers anyway If he's dyslexic, it would run in the family... I'm really intrigued now Quote
ldscott Posted April 21, 2011 Report Posted April 21, 2011 My 1st dedication! I'm so honoured! Loved those too chapters but am sad it going to be ending soon! I was shocked at Steve being their dad too, wonder what the story is behind that! Can't wait for the next chapter, as always Lisa x Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 21, 2011 Report Posted April 21, 2011 Oh my gosh ... that was just ... wow. Beautifully written, perfect emotions, etc. Well done. I look forward to more, update soon ... I want to see where this goes next. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 21, 2011 Author Report Posted April 21, 2011 Oh...my...god.I wasn't expecting that.Steve is and isn't Casey's father?But is Heath and Brax's?And Casey's mother isn't his mother either?Then...who is he?Looking forward to more of this! Quote
Zetti Posted April 22, 2011 Report Posted April 22, 2011 Miranda: Aww thanks for the comment. I didnt think this was that good but it makes me smile to know you liked it Lisa: Thanks hun.. the truth will be revealed when I update a bit later on x Carina: Thanks Not long to go, will be updating soon x Red: Hehe... Casey's father will be revealed.. its close to home.. Now I am feeling better, I will be making amendments to the chapter and posting a bit later x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Posted April 22, 2011 Brax is Casey's father!I really didn't see that coming.Casey staying with Nicole could be interesting. Loved the girls' talk between Nicole and Belle.Woah, what's Justin's connection to Steve?Really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 22, 2011 Report Posted April 22, 2011 Wow. Justin & Steve ... I sense trouble ... That was actually amazing ... perfectly written. Belle & Nicole's chat was lovely too. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Miranda Posted April 22, 2011 Report Posted April 22, 2011 God, this is interesting!! Really intriguing. So that makes Brax... 33? That could fit in. Makes me wonder if this is the real story in the actual series Well done Z, this story is really taking off Quote
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