Miranda Posted March 27, 2011 Report Posted March 27, 2011 (edited) Wow! Irene's dead? How dramatic, the poor woman. And Aden being there for her and helping her, while Justin's elsewhere with some bloke, having a shower? This is so intriguing, I can't wait to find out more Well done Edited March 27, 2011 by Miranda Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 27, 2011 Author Report Posted March 27, 2011 Oh gosh, I'm kind of in shock about Irene.I like that Aden's being a friend to Belle.Had the same thought as Miranda about Justin, at first I thought another girl had answered his phone, then when I heard it was a guy it was "Er..." Quote
Zetti Posted March 27, 2011 Report Posted March 27, 2011 Loved the whole Adelle interaction there. Another amazing chapter. Well done & I look forward to more. I hope Aden & Belle get together in this fic ... even though he's genuine, Justin doesn't seem very supportive. Love Carina xxx Thanks Carina. I cant promise an Adelle relationship but there will be more of them in the fic Wow! Irene's dead? How dramatic, the poor woman. And Aden being there for her and helping her, while Justin's elsewhere with some bloke, having a shower? This is so intriguing, I can't wait to find out more Well done Oooh well you will see.. maybe he is or maybe he isnt. Oh gosh, I'm kind of in shock about Irene.I like that Aden's being a friend to Belle.Had the same thought as Miranda about Justin, at first I thought another girl had answered his phone, then when I heard it was a guy it was "Er..." Thanks Red. I appreciate all the comments Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 27, 2011 Report Posted March 27, 2011 Wow, wow, wow. That was ana amazing chapter. Stupid Justin for not turning up ... & Belle kissing Aden! & he wanted to kiss her back! Although I would have loved it if he did, I loved how yo wrote it in that even though he wanted to, he couldn't complicate things, seeing as she was dating Justin. That was beautifully written. Well done. & Heath & Nicole! Wow, I can't wait to see what goes on there ... I look forward to reading more of them. Well done, beautifully written as always of course. & you shouldn't have had any doubt in posting that chapter because it was amazing. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Miranda Posted March 27, 2011 Report Posted March 27, 2011 What Carina said Sorry, I just got distracted by a bowl of cereal with my name on it Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 27, 2011 Author Report Posted March 27, 2011 Good update.I'm glad Aden pulled away because Belle's got a lot to sort out with Justin.Kind of intrigued by that flashback of Nicole and Heath and why he seemed distant afterwards.Looking forward to more! Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted March 28, 2011 Report Posted March 28, 2011 Awww Belle kissing Aden!!!! Aden is being very supportive. For some reason I had this image of Justin turning gay, "he's in the shower" is he cheating on Belle ;) Poor Belle, Irene Please update sooon!!! Quote
ldscott Posted March 28, 2011 Report Posted March 28, 2011 Great couple of chapters! Irene's dead! Can't believe it! Belle and Aden need to be together, he's so kind. Wonder what's going on with Heath? Can't wait to read more! Lisa x Quote
Miranda Posted March 28, 2011 Report Posted March 28, 2011 Nooooo, don't make Justin gay, noooooo Good work on this chapter Miss Zetti. Quote
Zetti Posted March 28, 2011 Report Posted March 28, 2011 Thanks so much to everyone for the heartwarming comments, I really needed that after the past few days.. I have the next chapter nearly done so hopefully it will be up tonight if not tomorrow Quote
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