Deano Posted June 8, 2011 Report Posted June 8, 2011 Its not an update, but if i do not update tomorrow night It'll be Monday (australian time)
Deano Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Chapter 15: Angelo sat in shock at what he was reading, he couldn’t believe his eyes, was Brax really a criminal. Angelo smiled when he received a text from Lilly. Charlie burst into the office. ‘Oh god you’re still here’ Charlie complained. ‘Yeah I am’ Angelo smirked. ‘Well I am gonna start working, so get lost’ ‘Um you might want to see this Charlie’ Angelo said pointing at his screen. Charlie sat down at stared at the screen, this cant be true she thought to herself, why’d Brax lie to her. Charlie starting to cry, ‘How come you are showing this to me?’ ‘Because you need to know what your boyfriend is doing’. ‘Brax has done nothing wrong, you’re just getting your wires crossed’ Charlie said. ‘Charlie I’m not, this is your Brax, so I’d be speaking to him very soon’ ‘Get real Angelo, now get of here, she said pushing him off his chair’ Angelo got up, he was not in the mood for a fight and walked out of the station. After about 2 hours Angelo emerged from some bushes unsure on what to believe. Angelo walked down to the beach and sat on it. Lilly walked up behind him, ‘Ignoring me babe?’ she asked. ‘No no I have just been busy, here let me make it up to you’ he said grabbing her hand. ‘Oh really’ She smiled. Angelo laid on top of Lilly, kissing her. ‘I have the whole afternoon and night off’ Angelo said between kisses. ‘Yours or mine then’ She smiled. ‘Yours’ ‘Sure, my bed is not as comfy as yours’ ‘Ok, mine’ Angelo said picking her up and started walking her back to his place. Brax stood in the distance, he couldn’t believe that Angelo was doing this, sleeping with a woman and that he was getting cranky at Charlie for sleeping with him. Xavier sat cuddling Ruby in the cinemas. ‘Babe, can you pass the drink’ Ruby asked. ‘Sure, but it’s gonna cost you a kiss’ ‘ok’ she smiled. Xavier bent down and started to kiss her, all over, making out with her face. ‘Xav, stop’ She said. ‘No’ Xavier said. ‘NOW’ Ruby yelled causing the whole cinema to turn around. ‘Why’d you do that, you stupid cow’ Xavier said getting up and leaving the cinemas. Angelo started to kiss Lilly as she managed undoing his buttons. ‘Who’d guess hot chick with an officer’ Lilly smiled. ‘You’re not hot’ Angelo said. ‘What?’ Lilly said getting up. ‘You’re more than that, you’re beautiful’ ‘Oh I thought you were gonna say something else’ ‘No I’m a good man’ Angelo smiled as he resumed kissing Lilly. Brax walked into Charlie’s office with a grin on his face. ‘What do you want?’ she asked. ‘You’ he smiled. ‘So you want me to escape out the window?’ she laughed. ‘Yep’ She smiled, shut down her computer and climbed out the window. Brax followed and the pair ran across the car park like a bunch of teenagers. When they reached her house, he burst inside kissing her. They fell in the couch but something caused them to sit up. ‘Ruby’ Charlie said. ‘Hi’ she said. ‘I’ll go’ Brax said ‘Bye’ ‘What’s wrong?’ ‘Xav and I had a fight, pretty sure it’d over’ ‘Hey don’t say that’ ‘Charlie can can’t talk, you said that about Angelo and you, but look what happened’ Charlie sighed and got up and left the couch. She picked up her phone which had been on silent, she had a text from Angelo, What does he want now, she murmured. ‘That was great, Again’ Lilly smiled. ‘I know’ Angelo said. ‘I love you, Angelo’ Lilly said ‘Um’ Angelo said, unsure of words. ‘Look I don’t care if you don’t love me back, loving two Bucktons must be hard’ ‘It’s not that’ Angelo said. ‘Then what is it?’ ‘I need to pick up Tom, Angelo said. ‘Oh crap you do too’ Lilly smiled. As Angelo got out of bed and threw his clothes on, Lilly got up and placed her clothes on is well. 'Lets go' Angelo smiled ---- Sorry its short its all i had
Deano Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 last chapter was CRAP so i'll make an effort on 16
Dingo x Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 Sorry I read this last night but I forgot to reply. Good chapter please update soon. xx
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 That was a good chapter. Xavier & Ruby ... oh dear ... I look forward to the next chapter. Love Carina xxx
pembie Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 I think it was a good chapter and your doing great with this story I do think Charlie being very mean to Angelo through I think he should stay with Lilly Charlie it will all end in tears with Brax you mark my words
Zetti Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 Oooh I agree with pembie, Charlie is being horrible to Angelo... Xavier and Ruby? Uhoh... Looking forward to more
Deano Posted June 14, 2011 Report Posted June 14, 2011 Chapter 16. THANK YOU..... ‘How could you’ Charlie screamed as Brax took a breath ‘Charlie, how’d you find out?’ Brax mumbled. ‘I’m a police officer remember?’ ‘Yeah baby I know, but no cop has never driven past there’ ‘Under cops have’ Charlie said. Brax bowed his head in shame, ‘Angelo’ Brax said. ‘Yes’ Charlie said. 6 months later. Charlie and Angelo try being friends and it is successful Charlie sat at the station she cried herself to sleep every night, she missed Brax so much. Ever since he went to prison to harvesting dope, Charlie’s life had changed. Angelo was right when he mentioned to her about Brax, but she refused to believe him, but he had been the best support in the last 6 months. Angelo entered the office, he saw Charlie crying. ‘Oh sorry’ he said turning his back. ‘No come in’ she said patting the seat next to him. ‘I got the tape’ he said fumbling through his pocket. ‘You have’ Charlie said, her face lighting up. ‘Here’ he gave her the tape. ‘Thank you’ Charlie said kissing his cheek. Angelo smiled as he got up and left the office. Angelo was no longer in Charlie’s office. He now was an undercover cop and sometimes he went against his will and did some dirty business. Charlie left her office and headed towards the prison on the outskirts of town. Charlie entered the prison with her bad in hands hiding a little something for Brax. She got to reception and smiled, said her name and she got transferred down to Brax’s cell. ‘Hey’ Brax said getting up. ‘Hi’ Charlie smiled. ‘So it’s been a while, you know 6 months’ Brax said ‘I know and I got a little something for you’ Charlie said giving the item to Brax. ‘What is it?’ He asked puzzled. ‘A tape’ ‘For what?’ ‘Security, Angelo was able to save a tape of you walking around for a day, render it to this and we place it up there and no one will know about us, having to fun’ ‘So you saying that we can have sex and to the patrolling officers, I am just walking around’ Brax said. ‘Yes’ Charlie smiled. ‘But why’d Angelo go to the trouble’ ‘He knew how much you meant to me’ ‘So he wants us together?’ ‘Yes’ ‘Thank him, when you get back to the station’ ‘I will’ Brax smiled and kissed Charlie, pulling her onto the prison bed. ‘Sorry it’s a single’ ‘It’s ok’ Charlie said between kisses. Angelo sat on Tom’s bed, playing with his teddy bear. ‘Daddy what are you doing?’ Tom asked. ‘Nothing mate, just looking at your teddy’ ‘Where’s Lilly?’ he asked. ‘Um mate, she’ll be over for dinner’ ‘And then can we play twister together?’ Tom asked ‘If Lilly wants to’ ‘But you too always play twister, or that’s what you say’ Tom said. ‘Yeah well we’ll have to wait and see’ Lilly knocked on the door and Angelo went to greet her, they had a slight kiss. ‘Ewwww daddy that’s gross’ ‘Well mate, it’s part of life’ ‘Hi Tom’ Lilly said. ‘Hi Lilly’ ‘Well I have put dinner on, so you want to get ready for dinner?’ ‘OK’ Lilly said grabbing Tom’s hand. Angelo smiled at Tom and Lilly, maybe she was the completion to his life. ‘You haven’t changed you know’ Charlie smiled as Brax held her. ‘I know’ Brax laughed. A slight noise was heard outside, the voice of an officer was heard. ‘Quick get up’ Brax said pushing Charlie. ‘Where?’ ‘Er Under the bed’ Charlie climbed under the bed as fast as she could, whilst Brax did back up his buttons, just as the officer walked in. ‘Dinner is here’ The officer said. ‘Thank you’ The officer left the room as Charlie got up gave him a kiss and changed the tape back over. ‘Bye’ ‘Bye’ Brax said smiling. 2-3 hours later. ‘Haha this is fun’ Tom said excitedly ‘It is’ Angelo said. Angelo was it the most compromising position and Tom was on the side of him. Lilly rolled the dice. ‘Oh No’ Lilly laughed. Angelo smiled as Lilly placed her hands underneath Angelo’s chest. It was Angelo’s turn he placed him leg in between Lilly’s legs. ‘Oh daddy’s gonna fall’ Tom said seeing Angelo struggle. Angelo slipped taking Lilly with him. The pair rolled around kissing. ‘Yucky’ Tom yelled. ‘Tom bed’ Angelo said getting up. ‘That’s not fair’ ‘NOW’ Angelo said. ‘Fine’ Tom said getting up and headed towards the bedroom. Angelo came back from the bedroom and took Lilly into his bedroom, ‘Come here baby’ he said ‘All I want is you’ she smiled. Morning rolled around, Angelo had Tom at Day Care and him and Lilly walked along the beach. They were talking when suddenly there was a bang and Angelo had stopped talking to her. ‘Angelo’ Lilly said, looking around to her horror he was shot, blood pooling under him. ‘Angelo’ she screamed. Pulling out her phone she called an ambulance and the police. NEXT TIME: -Will Angelo make it through? -Brax has a little something for Charlie when he released from prison - Lilly admits her true feeling towards Angelo and she see’s Charlie and Angelo flirt. -Tom has a hard time and Day Care.
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 14, 2011 Report Posted June 14, 2011 Oh wow ... oh dear, I hope Angelo will be okay ... Loved Charlie & Brax! Brilliantly written, well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx
pembie Posted June 14, 2011 Report Posted June 14, 2011 Good Chapter who has shot Angelo I wonder its got to have something to do with Brax surely maybe he paid someone to do it hmmmmm glad Angelo's with Lilly instead of Charlie Dont really trust Brax or Charlie in this fic after the way they have trated Angelo look forward to more
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