A Voice in My Ear (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Miranda]

Argh! Don't really kill him! Or Nicole! Don't kill anyone

But, I guess, I'd rather Nicole and the baby survived, if you really have to kill Romeo

Very well written, Red. Realistic and descriptive as always.

[HighwayUnicorn]

I love that chapter but you're not going to kill off Nicole or make anything bad happen to her or the baby are you?

Rabbit was fantastic as per usual ... brilliant, well done.

Well done, beautifully written as always & I look forward to more to see where you take this.

Love Carina xxx

[JosieTash]

Re my choice of Romeo, if others had been on the list to be on death’s door [exp. Xave], I would have opted to throw him to the wolves instead.

In your latest…. I soooooooooooooooooo don’t want anything to happen to Nic or the baby …both are too AWESOME …….

…… and Xave & Romeo’s encounter at that old mineshaft …..breathtaking !!!!!!

Cool Shakespeare reference too !!!!!

[lozlovesh&a]

ah, you leave it there? seriously? lol.

please continue.

[Jen]

Awesome chapter, Red.

One of my favourite quotes was this one.

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"You know, sometimes, as a font of useful information, you really suck.”

And then things go all dramatic for both Romeo/Xavier and Nicole.

I'm wondering if you've already decided the outcome of these events and just like stringing us along ... . If so, you are doing an awesome job. I'm hoping everyone gets out okay, but for storytelling purposes I don't know ... maybe something happens to the baby. So many unanswered questions. *Waits patiently for more*

[ashleyjane]

Hope everyone ok, and lets hope to god rabbit and miles find them in time hopefully nics baby alright ))

[Zetti]

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“You’re meant to be the lifeguard surfer dude in this outfit, can’t you think of something cool to keep us afloat?”

“I’m too cold to be cool.”

The bromance continues

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“Nicole!”His voice suddenly became anxious and she realised he had crouched beside her, tapping her face gently to try and get a response and checking her pulse.She tried to focus on his face, see who he was, but she couldn’t even manage that.All she could do was hear the bleep of a mobile phone making a call and then his anxious voice again.“Ambulance, fast.”

Please! Dont kill Nicole or the baby off! Please!

A great chapter as always with bits of humour in there!

Looking forward to the next instalment

[Miranda]

I bet its Lucas saving Nicole. That is why he came back to the bay. Or is it far too late at night and I'm reading this wrongly?

Glad Romeo didn't sink

But what about Alf? He was the third one in danger, wasn't he?

Excellent writing, Red, you are the man Although, in your new Purple colouring, should you not be Purple Ranger 1? Or does that sound too dodgy?

I think, Zetti, this is the bromance bit:

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.“I hope you’re not going to suggest we take all our clothes off and get in a sleeping bag together?”

That managed to wake Romeo up a bit.“What?”

“Well, that’s what they always do in the movies when they’re cold.Share body heat.”

Romeo grunted.“Shame our sleeping bags ended up at the bottom of a mineshaft.”

“Missed a trick, hey?”

“Defo.”

:o

Edited April 24, 2011 by Miranda

[ashleyjane]

Glad romeo and xave is alright:)))

Hopefully nic and her baby is alright:)))

And i'm wondering who is the guy and how did rabbit contacted him:)))

Great fan fic Red Ranger 1:)))

[HighwayUnicorn]

Nicole ... I hope she & the baby will be okay.

Another amazing chapter RR1 & I look forward to more.

Well done & beautifully written as always.

Love Carina xxx