The S Men (by Miranda and Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Miranda]

I love you getting so annoyed about it

I used to get annoyed with Lucas for the same reason Although we all loved Lucas in our house, even my daughter aged 1 at the time. She used to point at the screen and say 'Lu-cas'. It was worrying.

[Zetti]

I love you getting so annoyed about it

I used to get annoyed with Lucas for the same reason Although we all loved Lucas in our house, even my daughter aged 1 at the time. She used to point at the screen and say 'Lu-cas'. It was worrying.

Honestly! What are we going to do with you!

[Red Ranger 1]

Great update!I see you've got the hang of fight scenes, my work here is done.Loved it.Wasn't expecting Charlique to be a turncoat.Really looking forward to seeing how this ends.

[Miranda]

Cheeky devil! Got the hang of fight scenes indeed Your purpleness is going to your head.

Thanks for the comment though

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. I agree with RR1's comment. Can't wait to read the next chapter

[Jen]

Oh! I think this is my favourite chapter so far. I really liked all the action, and seeing all the S Men/Women working together and using their powers.

I wish I had something more constructive to contribute, except to re-iterate how much I adore this 'verse and the powers you've given to these characters.

[Miranda]

Thanks Jen and Jarliefan Not sure you'll like what I did with the next chapter But its all fun

[JosieTash]

LOVE this fic !!! .... ........especially these bits this time round ......

• Roverene going all boys cub when he thought it MUST be one of the girls who;s the traitor, and

• Rogue Ruby & April Jubilee versus Braxneto .

Btw, this fic is educational too. I never know Jubilee was an X Men, when I 1st saw April Jubilee, thought it might have been a 007 character/reference or a British festival that I hadn’t ever heard off [being form Oz and all] !!!!!

[Miranda]

thanks JT. Glad you're finding it educational, I aim to please all my readers

Two more chapters to go I decided.

[Red Ranger 1]

Btw, this fic is educational too. I never know Jubilee was an X Men, when I 1st saw April Jubilee, thought it might have been a 007 character/reference or a British festival that I hadn’t ever heard off [being form Oz and all] !!!!!

Faux comic geek hat on:Yep, Jubilee is one of the X-Men, she was introduced in the late '80s and was one of the main characters in the classic '90s cartoon.(Did I jog your memory on that one, Miranda?)She does appear in the movies, played by someone called...goes and looks it up... Kea Wong, mainly the second one:Her big moment got cut out but she does still get a namecheck at one point.