Zetti Posted April 12, 2011 Report Posted April 12, 2011 wow! What an amazing pair we make, we can save the world! Add Red with his comic knowledge and Carina with her constructive criticism and we'll be unbeatable! Oooh yeh! Perfect Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 12, 2011 Author Report Posted April 12, 2011 Hey I did read most of this earlier but have just finished off the last few sentences Another amazing chapter ... I loved it. A fight scene? Wow! I look forward to that, most definitely. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Jen Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 Once again, I am amazed and astounded by your ability to keep me hooked, and also continually make me laugh with your dialogue. Oh Dex, honey. Everyone has been questioning your manily virtue for quite some time . But I still love you! Marilyn obviously has no idea what is going on. Brax probably just offered her tea and wanted a palm reading, and she thought he was a nice young man, so went along with it. *is timid* C-can I be part of your superhero team too? I don't have much to offer except being a perfectionist, and maybe having a excessive need to plan things. I work well with others and am a consciencious student . Quote
Inactive User Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 Great chapter. Liked it I used to watch Star Wars in the past And I liked the one best with the little boy in it (I forgot his name, Aklain or something like that. Update soon xx Quote
Miranda Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 Yes, Jen of course you can be part of the superhero team But remember it says Marilyn saw Braxneto's secret weapon.... more of that later Thanks for the comments. BTW Mr Ranger is working on the fight scene as I type, so please no one to steal his glory Quote
Zetti Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 Yes, Jen of course you can be part of the superhero team But remember it says Marilyn saw Braxneto's secret weapon.... more of that later Thanks for the comments. BTW Mr Ranger is working on the fight scene as I type, so please no one to steal his glory Yayy... another addition! Anyone else interested? Quote
Zetti Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 Loved Roverine in chapter! Roverine thought for a moment. “Can you morph into male forms as well?” “Oh yes.” Charlique morphed into Lyclops. “What do you think of this fine form?” “Perfect,” he replied. And hit her. So funny! Marilyn made me laugh in this bit “So the S Men have decided to stand and fight,” Braxneto realised, gesturing to his minions. “Attack them!” The anonymous minions hung back. “Oh, come on. A handful of super-powered mutants against an army of non-powered cannon fodder henchmen? What are you worried about? Fine. I shall lead the way.” “You show them, Braxy!” Marilyn shouted from the sidelines. “Teach those nasty S Men a thing or two!” “All right, give me a try,” Xavier offered, stepping forward. “You S Men never learn,” Braxneto replied. “You always send a guy with metal limbs to fight the master of magnetism.” He waved a hand and lifted Xavier up in the air, pulling his bionic limbs in painful directions. “Then let me rain on your parade,” Nicole Storm offered. She gestured at the air above Braxneto and a storm cloud came into view. It started to rain, soaking him to the skin. Marilyn’s face fell. “Oh, well, that’s just cheating.” This fic never fails to make me laugh! Hope there's another update soon from either of you.. Quote
Miranda Posted April 13, 2011 Report Posted April 13, 2011 (edited) Oh well done, my young apprentice Just off to bed so will comment more tomorrow.... EDIT: Good morning all Yes, that was hilarious. Thanks so much for doing that. I loved the Roverine bit too, and Lyclops swinging the wheelchair round. Hm... I'll have to get on with the next bit Well done, Red. You are hereby promoted to Official Fight Scene Writer. There will be other scenes coming up Edited April 14, 2011 by Miranda Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 13, 2011 Author Report Posted April 13, 2011 Ha ... that was fantastic! I loved it ... thank you so much for that update. Honestly, that was just brilliant ... Roverine & Marylin were just brilliant. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Jen Posted April 14, 2011 Report Posted April 14, 2011 Yes, Jen of course you can be part of the superhero team But remember it says Marilyn saw Braxneto's secret weapon.... more of that later Thanks for the comments. BTW Mr Ranger is working on the fight scene as I type, so please no one to steal his glory Thanks for letting me join! *bounces* I won't let you down . Ahh, the "secret weapon". My mind went to a really dirty place when I read that the first time around. But I am curious. Great job on the fight scene, with each of the S Men with one of the minions. And then kneed him in the balls. Not the ones made of fire. I snorted out loud at this . Way too funny. The humour is amazing. Keep the crack coming. Quote
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