Perry Posted June 20, 2011 Report Posted June 20, 2011 (edited) I'm up to chaperter 11 just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this fic. Loving dexters lines and am not trusting Amy one bit. Now I'm up to date, well don red... definitely not trusting Amy one bit, enjoying and believing Ruby/Romeo and am actually feeling very sorry for both of them oh and Casey and Indi as well. Edited June 22, 2011 by Perry Quote
Miranda Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Posted June 22, 2011 Another excellent chapter. (someone hire him to be a script writer for HAA?) Loved Casey and Dex's intervention with Xavier. They are a good double act. Xavier is obviously a romantic who hasn't thought ahead, while the other two have. Loved the awkwardness of the Ruby/ Romeo/ Indi situation. Your characterisation of Indi is perfect. She is so hesitant, she isn't sure if its normal for Romeo not to sleep with her FOR A MONTH? Wake up girl! If he wanted you, he wouldn't do that. Yet Ruby is sleeping with Romeo and Casey. The woman's insatiable Amy has a secret, surely. Well done, big congrats Quote
Perry Posted June 22, 2011 Report Posted June 22, 2011 Awesome update i know Amy is serious about marrying him - She's also seriously got her own agenda for doing it, I also read it to quickly for a second and thought Xavier and dexter were sitting on a bed not at a bar. wonder what that was about? Quote
Zetti Posted June 22, 2011 Report Posted June 22, 2011 Amy has to have a secret. It makes no sense for her to be marrying Xavier without a logical reason. So Romeo isn't sleeping with Indi but Ruby is sleeping with Casey & Romeo I loved Casey though with the questionnaire that Dex made Looking forward to more Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted June 23, 2011 Report Posted June 23, 2011 Awesome update. Still unsure about Amy. Guess we will find out soon enough. Continue please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 23, 2011 Report Posted June 23, 2011 Wondering why Amy is so serious about marrying Xavier ... I loved the interaction between Nicole & Indi at the beginning & then Ruby finding out about Romeo & Indi not sleeping together. Interesting how Ruby is sleeping with both Romeo & Casey yet Romeo is only sleeping with Ruby, not Indi ... Another great chater, very well written. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Barbara Posted June 23, 2011 Report Posted June 23, 2011 Ch 13: Gina's reaction was to be expected. As John said, I don't think she can stop them. Romeo wants to talk about things in a hotel room? WHy do I have a feeling they'll be doing more than talking? It looks like Xavier has some doubts about the wedding. Wow Ruby even went and bought a negligee for the occasion. They aren't talking much, are they? Ch 14: As much as their 'affair' may be exciting, I don't think it's wise. At some point, someone will find out about it and they'll be in trouble again. But I like reading about them sneaking around though. “Well, what are we going to do?” “Plan the bucks night?”Casey suggested. “An excellent suggestion,”Dexter agreed,“A chance to indulge in an ancient male bonding ritual dating back to the pagan rites of fertility.Or possibly made up as an excuse to get drunk by Dad’s generation.” “Can you be serious?”Indigo asked. “No,”Dexter replied,“We’re guys.We don’t do serious.If one of our friends is having a midlife crisis a couple of decades early, our response is to get drunk, watch footie and under no circumstances discuss our feelings.”He looked at Casey, suddenly uncertain.“Did I get that right?” “Sounds about right, yeah,”Casey confirmed. You got to love Dex! Ch 15: I like the mention of Rachel and Tony. Planning a wedding is stressful, especially when they only have such a short time to organise everything. Is that what they call revision nowadays? Ch 16: I feel a bit sorry for Indigo. I guess sleeping with two girls would be too tiring. I enjoyed the Dexter/Casey/Xavier moment. Could this 'affair' mean more to Romeo? More please. Quote
pembie Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Hey Red Sorry I haven't commented in years I fell behind with this story I'm up to date now I would like to say it's really Awesome You write the characters so well I really like the Romeo and Ruby love affair story There is something really dodgy going on with Amy so I'm gripped by that too Quote
Zetti Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 So Romeo is now sleeping with Indi! She has blinkers on.. Sorry I just dont like them two together. Romeo & Ruby.. I think someone is going to catch them.... Looking forward to more Red! Quote
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