Barbara Posted July 5, 2011 Report Posted July 5, 2011 Ch 18: I don’t like the lie Ruby told Charlie! I think it was too much! You don’t lie about going to your (grand)dad’s grave when you’re actually meeting up with a guy you’re sleeping with. Oh oh! Indi saw them! I thought it was nice of Romeo to order all that food for them! Ch 19: It looks like Romeo and Ruby are in love with each other imo. The end of Indigo and Romeo's conversation was totally unexpected! I thought she had seen Romeo and Ruby, not Amy! It has now been proven that Amy can’t be trusted. I wonder who her boyfriend/lover (?) is and why she wants to marry Xavier. You certainly had us all fooled RR1! Nice work! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Quote
pembie Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 I also fell for your trick I thought Indi had seen Romeo and Ruby too clever twist there this is one of my favs stories Quote
Zetti Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Romeo & Ruby. I know I shouldn't like them but I really do! So Amy just needed a husband. Poor Xavier though. Can you please put Xavier back with April? Please? & that last scene was so cute with both of them putting their heads in Xaviers shoulders. Such a nice friendship moment. All in all loved the chapter & I look forward to more Quote
pembie Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 What a bitch Amy is using Xavier like that I think Romeo and Ruby are in love they just dont want to say it I think you might get Xavier and Indi together Quote
Miranda Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Posted July 6, 2011 (edited) Ooh, hello Xavier, two girls comforting you! If only the next scene was them all waking up in bed together, or is that one of Perry's fics, hm... Romeo wanting to tell Ruby first, aw... Yes I think they are in Lerve. But what about poor old Casey, he's keeping a low profile. Maybe he should marry Amy I thought Xave was going to marry Amy for the money for a minute, but knowing you Red, he probably did and kept it secret Brilliant Red, as ever Edited July 6, 2011 by Miranda Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 I knew something was up with Amy.. I think you should put Indi with Xav... would be interesting! I liked that chapter... continue please. Quote
Inactive User Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 Sorry haven't been commenting on this fanfiction much. Had been catching up with several updates I had missed out and they are good Update soon xx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 Not liking Amy & how she's been stringing Xavier along. Unfair on him. But that was another great update & I loved the character interaction & emotions, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Perry Posted July 8, 2011 Report Posted July 8, 2011 Indi/Xavier Or am I reading too much into Indi putting her arm around him? Brilliant update as usual Quote
Zetti Posted July 9, 2011 Report Posted July 9, 2011 Uhoh, I knew they would get caught, I just knew it but at the ending. I know I shouldn't like them two together... but Red you have made me soft! & I loved the Casey/Xavier interaction, I wish we had more of that on the show.. Looking forward to more Quote
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