HighwayUnicorn Posted July 27, 2011 Report Posted July 27, 2011 Actually adored Dex in that update! & his therapy sessions. Brilliant. Well written, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted July 28, 2011 Report Posted July 28, 2011 aww. That was a great chapter. Great ending. I really liked it. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 28, 2011 Report Posted July 28, 2011 I liked that ending ... you wrapped it up very nicely. Thank you so much for writing this. It was amazing & a joy to read. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted July 28, 2011 Report Posted July 28, 2011 That was a nice ending. Everyone is happy in their own ways. Thanks for writing this. Look forward to more fics from you soon. Quote
Miranda Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Posted July 28, 2011 Aw, nice ending. I was so worried that you were going to get Romeo and Indi back together or something Glad everyone ended up happy. I think Xavier is the straightforward guy Indi needs, as I've said many times before... Well done Red. I think that was one of, if not THE favourite fic of mine ever. Quote
Zetti Posted July 28, 2011 Report Posted July 28, 2011 I loved the ending apart from the Xavier & Indi part but that is just me. Aww Romeo & Ruby perfect for them and I love how Nicole chose to say goodbye. Well done for writing this. I hope you write more fics xx Quote
Inactive User Posted July 29, 2011 Report Posted July 29, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it so far and the ending is perfect and well-written Looking forwards to read another new fanfiction from you soon, RR1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 30, 2011 Report Posted July 30, 2011 Thank you, in no particular order, to Miranda, Zetti(sorry you didn't like Xindi...), pembie, Carina, lozlovesh&a, Perry, JarlieFan, Barbara, JosieTash and dramadoll.Apologies to anyone I missed.Glad you all liked it.Except for the bits you didn't.And thank you for your comments. I was so worried that you were going to get Romeo and Indi back together or something As if I'd do that... Quote
JosieTash Posted July 31, 2011 Report Posted July 31, 2011 My BIG catch up continues !!!!........ This fic was COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL and most unexpected ......... Amy wanted to marry Xave for the inheritance Rubes & Romeo bailing to WA for a new life Xave/ Indi ...... but its good that they are, as i’m not that big a fan of either There’s also some GREAT dialogie in here, like ..... Oh, look, it’s Summer Bay’s Public Enemy Numbers One and Two,”Miles commented when Romeo and Ruby finally made it to the house. They both looked uncomfortable.“We’re sorry, Mr.Copeland,”Ruby began. Miles silenced them with a wave of the hand.“Okay, I suspect Charlie’s given both of you a better lecture than I could give.You did the wrong thing and I think you both know that and there’s gonna be enough consequences and enough people giving you a hard time without me adding to it.So, just eat your breakfast.” “I need to talk to you.” “What about?About the fact that you’ve been sleeping with Romeo?You’re a bit late, half the town already knows about that one.” “I’m sorry, Casey, I never meant for this to happen…” “Oh, you think that makes it all right, do you?”Casey looked at her in disgust.“You know, when I first met you, I thought you were really something.A real classy girl, the sort of person I didn’t think I’d have a chance in hell with.But now?You might have your airs and graces, your policewoman mother, your cosy middle class home…but you’re no better than the girls round here.I’m through with the lot of you.”He turned to get in the van. “Casey, wait!”Ruby protested,“You can’t throw everything away over this!” “What, you really think you’re worth me ruining my life over?”Casey asked scornfully,“I’ve got my HSC, I can go anywhere, go to uni, get a job.I don’t need Mangrove River and I don’t need Summer Bay.And I never have to see any of you again.”He got into the van with the other boys.“See you, Ruby,”he added sarcastically. .................... AND ....... “And I guess I need to say thank you.It was a long time since I’d had anywhere that felt like a home until I came here but…this did.” Miles waved a hand airily.“Ah, you brightened the place up.Sometimes you even made it overlit.”He gave Romeo a brief hug.“Be good.And if you can’t be good, be careful.” Ruby hugged him as well.“Goodbye, Mr.Copeland.Or do I get to call you Miles now I’m not at school?” “No, now you have to call me ‘my lord and master’.”He patted her on the shoulder.“Go on, get going, the pair of you.” Yeah, totally LOVED it !!!!! Quote
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