JosieTash Posted May 19, 2011 Report Posted May 19, 2011 REALLY enjoying this fic !!!! ….. Chapter 5 ….. Love the way Ruby & Romeo reacted just like on the show, esp. Romeo not sleeping with Indi when she was throwing herself at him Chapter 6 ….. LOVED this line “I would,”Dexter noted,“But I think I’ll be too busy sticking pins in my eyes.” AND the intrigue of Xave and new girl Amy. Quote
Miranda Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Posted May 22, 2011 Brilliant, especially: “Are you really interested or are you just making conversation?”Indigo asked. “The latter.” “Why does that never happen to me?”Dexter sighed.April hit him on the arm.“Before I met April, of course,”he amended without a pause. “So, you met her on the beach and brought her home with you?”Romeo asked. Xavier tilted his head, adopting a mock pleading voice.“Yeah, Dad, can I keep her?” Dad indeed! ““We were a bit busy,”Casey added. “And that’s as much information as we can handle,”Dexter told them. Telling Casey to shut up “She walked round the back of the sofa, intending to sit down…but instead she nearly collided with Romeo as he came through from the kitchen, both of them pulling up short. “Sorry,”he told her.She gave him an awkward smile then stepped past him.He found himself following her progress with his eyes for a moment until he remembered where he was and quickly shifted his attention to the others Oh, the secret affair In fact, anything Dex says is fab.u.lous. You see Red, I must love this fic or I wouldn't be doing quotes Very well done, I am becoming your fangirl Quote
Zetti Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 “So, you met her on the beach and brought her home with you?”Romeo asked. Xavier tilted his head, adopting a mock pleading voice.“Yeah, Dad, can I keep her?” I still cant stop laughing at how much this made me laugh “Guess so,”Ruby conceeded.She walked round the back of the sofa, intending to sit down…but instead she nearly collided with Romeo as he came through from the kitchen, both of them pulling up short. “Sorry,”he told her.She gave him an awkward smile then stepped past him.He found himself following her progress with his eyes for a moment until he remembered where he was and quickly shifted his attention to the others.“Dinner’s ready.” I get the feeling another 'fling' is on the way.... “Well, I guess he found something better to do,”Romeo suggested. They stepped through the chalet door…to the sight of Xavier making out with a blonde girl on the couch. “Yeah, that just about sums it up,”Indigo commented. Well thats one way of putting it lol Looking forward to more x Quote
Barbara Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 Chapter 3: You got to love Dexter! He’s funny. I can’t believe Ruby and Romeo slept together again, especially when Indi and/or Casey could have caught them. Chapter 4: It looks like it is going to be hard for Ruby and Romeo to stay away from each other. I really thought Casey was going to go to the beach and see them in action. Lol at Xavier’s comment! Chapter 5: I can see why Romeo didn’t think sleeping with Indi so soon after Ruby would have been a good idea. Maybe Ruby just thought she’d forget about what happened with him when she slept with Casey. I’m sure April is right. Xavier will find someone eventually. I’m not really surprised that April and Dexter aren’t sharing a room yet. Chapter 6: It looks like Xavier may already have found someone. Amy seems nice. Chapter 7: I think Indi is right. They should give Amy and Xavier a break. It can't be fun to be the third wheel. Romeo is going to have to stop looking at Ruby like that or someone will notice. More please. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 Another awesome chapter. I loved it ... Dex is just amazing! Love Carina xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted May 23, 2011 Report Posted May 23, 2011 Great chapter Gonna love amazing Dex! Update soon xx Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 23, 2011 Report Posted May 23, 2011 'yeah, dad can i keep her' lol. if you must i suppose. funny! keep going please. Quote
JosieTash Posted May 24, 2011 Report Posted May 24, 2011 Enjoying this fic, especially …… “I just bumped into her on the beach this morning,”Xavier explained,“We got chatting and came back here.” “Why does that never happen to me?”Dexter sighed.April hit him on the arm.“Before I met April, of course,”he amended without a pause. and Ruby stared after her open mouthed.“Who was that?” “She’s with Xavier,”April explained. “Fast worker,”Casey commented. Ruby still hadn’t lost her shocked look.“And what, she’s moved in here now?” Quote
Zetti Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 I liked that chapter it was short but that was good The best bits were Xavier and Dexter were leaning against the front of the bus, Xavier the odd one out again.Since he and Amy had met, they’d spent every day together, hanging out, making out…They’d said a brief goodbye the previous evening, she’d known he was leaving, he’d mentioned it enough times.Since then, nothing. I like the image you put across, it was something that normal teens do and I like the fact that you put it in. “Okay,”Ruby accepted as she climbed up into the cab, her attitude a bit more weary than it had been a week earlier,“Check your tickets, everyone, next stop Summer Bay.” I wonder what everyone will think of Amy... how will Gina/Palmer react? Looking forward to more soon x Quote
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