HighwayUnicorn Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I am so sorry, I read this last night but didn't get a chance to comment. I just loved everything, the interaction, etc. Brilliant, well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Loved it. Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Great as ever Is it just me, or is Amy a bit clingy/ pushy/ sinister? It seems a bit odd to go back with Xavier when she'd only just met him Does she not have her own home? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 LOVE how my faves Ruby & Dex were in fine form ….. There was a stunned silence from the others.“You have got to be joking,”Ruby said at last. AND “Women, my friend,”Dexter sighed,“They chew you up, they spit you out, they move on to some other poor sucker.Just an experience on the circle of life.”He noticed April, standing just within earshot, glaring at him and then moving off.He rested his head against the bus.“I’ve got a girlfriend now,”he told himself,“I can’t say stuff like that anymore.” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 “Hey, you’ve only got the uni timetable with its three study periods a day to worry about,”Romeo pointed out,“I’ve got the good old Summer Bay High tie to put back on.” She gave him a smile of sympathy.“You regretting going back to school?” Oh poor Romeo! I'm glad he decided to go back to school though. “Women, my friend,”Dexter sighed,“They chew you up, they spit you out, they move on to some other poor sucker.Just an experience on the circle of life.”He noticed April, standing just within earshot, glaring at him and then moving off.He rested his head against the bus.“I’ve got a girlfriend now,”he told himself,“I can’t say stuff like that anymore.” Yes, he shouldn't say stuff like that anymore or he'll soon lose his girlfriend! But it was still funny! I find it a bit weird that Amy is just going to go with Xavier when she only met him a few days ago. It'll be interesting to see how things will go once they're back home. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Continue please. Love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Brilliant Red I think Amy either has no family or she's running away from a bad situation. She was all over Xavier now she's backing off rapidly. So, what is Ruby going to tell Nicole? I hope she doesn't tell her about the Romeo situation tbh, that would put Nic in a difficult situation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 I was sure that I had commented Amy looks dodgy... Am not liking the sound of her... Ooh is Ruby going to tell Nicole?? That will put Nic in a tough position... Definitely looking forward to moe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 (edited) Fantastic as per usual, Red. Brilliantly written & this is a very interesting fic, I look forward to more & to see where you take this. Love Carina xxx Edited June 2, 2011 by -Carina- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 LOVED how Nic was in fine form in this chapter ….. “Hey, my weekend has consisted of burbing and changing and feeding and rocking to sleep.And that’s just Miles.” AND Nicole swung herself round into a sitting position and patted the space next to her.“Okay, come on then, tell the old woman all about it.You have a good time?” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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