HighwayUnicorn Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 I loved the interaction between Charlie & Leah in that chapter. Another brilliant chapter. Update soon. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 aw, I love that Liam & Bianca are married and Bianca's pregnant and Leah & Miles are engaged.... I hope that Brax & Charlie can work things out and he sees Olivia. Continue please. Quote
Dingo x Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 Can't wait for your next update. Yay for Bianca and Liam & Leah and Miles Please update soon can't wait to read more of this. xx Quote
soph1303 Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 Brilliant update!!!! Please update really soon - I can't wait to see what Brax says and what he's going to do when he finds out about his daughter Olivia!! Quote
Jacqui Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 I can't wait to find out how Brax will react Quote
callyha Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 I've just caught up on the chapters I've missed....AMAZING Love this story its fab! Really wanting Charlie to bump into Ruby and Brax now Awwwwwww A chax baby (I never saw that coming by the way ) More soon please! Quote
Inactive User Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 Great chapter. Can't wait to see how Brax/Ruby react to Charlie's return and that they had a daughter/sister they never knew about. Update soon xx Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 The last line was simply amazing!; the broken glass symbolising their broken hearts! A fantastic image! Great chapter Lucii! Really looking forward to the next one! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 Aww, poor Charlie & Brax ... I enjoyed that chapter though, it was really well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 Aw, it was getting so good, I wish the chapter was a bit longer! I actually laughed at this part here - the honesty and embarassment of it! Brax could do nothing but gaze at the only woman he had ever loved aside from his mother. At least he's honest about his feelings! Wow, surprised that he kissed Charlie although his feelings would be all mixed up in that moment so you can hardly blame him! I feel really sorry for Brax now...he's getting so much thrown at him all at once! First Charlie comes back into his life and secondly, he's going to find out he has a daughter! That's a lot to take in all in a couple of hours! Hopefully he takes it well! Really looking forward to the next chapter Lucii! Quote
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