Miranda Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Ooh, Leah, what's going on with you? I hope she's having a steamy romance with someone I like the way you put the speech in italics, Lucii, it makes it so clear to read. I hate fics when the speech is all muddled up with the rest of the narrative Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Oh I like this alot! Easy to read too. Can't wait to see whats next and the girly night sounds good. Please continue. Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Omg I loved that chapter!! You write their relationship really interestingly Lucii! I absolutely LOVE the chemistry that you have created between them! I agree with Carina! I love all the Charlie/Brax fics that are coming out at the moment! Someone will have to think of a couple name for them We already have! It's Chax! Next chapter soon please Lucii! Can't wait to read more! Xxxx Quote
Miranda Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Chax! LOL! I like that you have the female first, I get fed up with the male always coming first in these relationships! So to speak. Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 (edited) I think Chax was chosen mainly becase 'Brarlie' doesn't really work! I love the name Chax though! It sounds really sexy and sort of rough, which exactly mirrors Charlie and Brax's relationship! Xxx Edited May 8, 2011 by LauraPhilly!! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 ^ Yeah, it definitely does reflect their relationship! I agree with that! Another amazing chapter I am loving it. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Zetti Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 I love it so far! I really want to read more soon x Quote
Danni02 Posted May 8, 2011 Author Report Posted May 8, 2011 Great update! Oh Leah whats going on with you eh?! lol... Hmmm so first chapter Brax was late and second he wasnt texting back... I hope he isn't doing anything dodgy that's going to ruin the greatness of chax! Update soon Quote
callyha Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Great update and so easy to read Loving loving LOVING Chax, and Leah! who's got her attention...... More sooooooon please Quote
biancaliamca Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 loving this! please update soon! xxx milli xxx Quote
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