Everything Happens For A Reason (by Zetti) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Loved the reference to Colleen & how nothing will stay quiet or a secret in Summer Bay with her around.

The chapter flowed perfectly fine & everyone's interaction was just great. Well done.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Miranda]

I think this chapter is fine. Its subtle.

Heath is very mysterious, always rushing off places, but he's obviously got himself sorted out and tries to help other people e.g. Romeo.

I also like the way its centred around Brax trying to make his restaurant work and trying to get his brothers to help out, but they don't want to It sounds realistic, like a busy manager would be.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Liked it Liked the Angelo/Charlie chat on the beach. Liked the reference to Colleen. Update soon xx This is really good

[Zetti]

Loved the reference to Colleen & how nothing will stay quiet or a secret in Summer Bay with her around.

The chapter flowed perfectly fine & everyone's interaction was just great. Well done.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

Thanks Carina x

I think this chapter is fine. Its subtle.

Heath is very mysterious, always rushing off places, but he's obviously got himself sorted out and tries to help other people e.g. Romeo.

I also like the way its centred around Brax trying to make his restaurant work and trying to get his brothers to help out, but they don't want to It sounds realistic, like a busy manager would be.

Thanks I like to make my fic mirror reality.

Great chapter. Liked it Liked the Angelo/Charlie chat on the beach. Liked the reference to Colleen. Update soon xx This is really good

I am glad you all picked up on the Colleen reference

Just to let you know that the next chapter is the last one. It should be up later on today x

[HighwayUnicorn]

That was perfectly written. Brilliant, absolutely amazing.

A fantastic chapter. Well done.

Love Carina xxx

[Miranda]

Oh, is that the end? A sweet story, they would make a lovely couple I don't think any story is perfect, so don't worry about that. Art and creativity is what people make it, its not like maths: 1+1= 2 every time.

You were brave writing this, I know how nerve wracking it is writing slash. Well done to you

[Zetti]

That was perfectly written. Brilliant, absolutely amazing.

A fantastic chapter. Well done.

Love Carina xxx

Thanks darling xx

Oh, is that the end? A sweet story, they would make a lovely couple I don't think any story is perfect, so don't worry about that. Art and creativity is what people make it, its not like maths: 1+1= 2 every time.

You were brave writing this, I know how nerve wracking it is writing slash. Well done to you

Aww thanks so much x

[Zetti]

This can be moved to the NDL

Thanks again to all who read it

[Inactive User]

Wow wow I am lost for words!! The ending was soo amazing and well=written! Loved it Well done, Zetti I love reading your fanfictions. And hey by the way, thanks for commenting on my fanfiction *hugs*

[Zetti]

Aww thanks sarah means a lot xx