pembie Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Posted June 12, 2011 I think we should all have a friend like Rabbit she's just hilarious Great Chapter Quote
Zetti Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 “I’ll have a strawberry milkshake please,”Rabbit decided. “I’ll have a strawberry milkshake please,”Miles echoed. “And a cheese and ham roll.” “And a cheese and ham roll.” Too funny, Rabbit and Miles are too hilarious! “Ah, cup of coffee and a triple chocolate muffin.”He noticed Rabbit’s expression.“I’m an adult.The rules are different.Just…find a table and sit down.” I should try that one sometime “Well, we’ve only got ten minutes.” “Okay, now you’re just showing off.” Loved this as well. Looking forward to more Quote
Barbara Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Chapter 6 Rabbit should think before speaking. You don't tell a new mum babies are ugly; she could be offended! Rabbit considered this.“I think you’ve got a problem.” “Like?” “Like having rabbits walk in on you in the middle of the night.” “Well, there’s a way to fix that, isn’t there?”Nicole looked at Rabbit’s piercing gaze and sighed.“I guess… I guess it’s not ideal, all of us living here, Ben in with me.Lucas and I have talked about getting our own place but…” Rabbit patted her hand.“Leave it to Auntie Rabbit.” Nicole looked at her sceptically.“Just like that?” “Hey, have I ever let you down?”Rabbit saw Nicole start to answer.“They call that a rhetorical question.” Indeed, that house is a bit crowded. I wonder what Rabbit will come up with. Chapter 7 Miles still has to get used to Rabbit being visible to the rest of the world. I liked how he repeated her order! Lily's first crush! Aw sweet! It's nice to see things are going well for April and Xavier. Don't ruin that! More please. Quote
elikell Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Loved it as usual. I love how Miles and Rabbit interact. It'd be hard to get used to your imaginary friend suddenly becoming real. Love the humour! Continue please Quote
JosieTash Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 Ch 6 – There’s some GREAT lines here …..especailly …… “Why not?I heard him crying, I figured you wouldn’t be having sex or something while that was going on.”Rabbit sat down on the bed next to Nicole and looked at Ben.“Babies are really ugly, aren’t they?” “Turns out we’re having a slumber party,”Lucas told her. Ch 7 - Miles & Rabbit are just the best ….. “Hey, I said I’d shout you lunch.Just try and pick something that includes ingredients other than sugar. And chocolate.” Leah looked from one to the other in bemusement.“I can actually hear her, you know.” “Yes,”Miles agreed,“Sorry.Habit.” …. and sexy Xapril is cooool too !!! ….. “Maybe this is not such a good idea,”Xavier suggested, although he was still removing her school dress. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 13, 2011 Report Posted June 13, 2011 I love Rabbit! & her & Miles are just so funny together! Amazingly written as always, well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Imaginary future girl... lol. I love it. VJ & Lilly! So cute. I hope they actually go out when Lilly returns with Gypsy . Continue please. Quote
JosieTash Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 LOOOOVE how Dex & Rabbit “bounce” off each other........ ....... and it’s coooool that Gypsy is worried about Lily [given Gypsy’s own history with boys] !!!! Quote
elikell Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Love it. Very well written. Rabbit is very amusing. You've written her so well. Update soon please Quote
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