Danni02 Posted May 28, 2011 Report Posted May 28, 2011 oohh Brax said he loved her! And I get the feeling that Charlie loves him too. Great updates, looking forward to more
biancaliamca Posted May 29, 2011 Report Posted May 29, 2011 Leah sat down with charlie at one of the tables. "Do you want to tell me what is going on?" Leah asked concerned for her friend. "I can't" Charlie replied, shivering. "Why not? Come on Charlie, whatever it is i can help you" "Have you ever done something that you know is wrong but you can't help but carry on, like you don't care?" Charlie said, not looking up from the table and caressing her hands around the coffee mug so her hands could get some warmth. Charlie loved her job. She loved being a police officer, she loved making people happy and putting away the criminals. Being a police officer, Charlie had met a lot of criminals, and she thought she was good at sussing out a good guy to a wrong'un. "In what way?" Leah asked, trying to sympathise with her friend. "I don't know, just well what i've done isn't necessarily wrong, just people may believe it is, and i know that people won't take to kindly to it but i don't care" Charlie began to ramble on. "I'm not quite understanding you?" Leah said confused. "Can you just promise me one thing Leah?" Leah nodded " Yeh of course" "What ever happens can you not judge me, just hear my side of it first if word gets out?" "o-k?" Leah replied, still utterly confused as to what Charlie could be on about "Thankyou for the drink but i really must go" "Charlie, it's still chucking it down" "I'm fine really, it helps me think, i'll see you at home later yeah?" "Yeah ok, cya" Leah smiled as Charlie left the diner "What did she say Dahl?" Irene asked her business parter as she returned to the kitchens. "Not a lot, well a lot but not anything that really made any sense, i'll try speaking to her again tonight" And the two carried on with their jobs at the diner. --- "How was your meal guys?" Brax asked as he went to collect the dirty plates from his brothers table "It was great thanks" replied Ruby "and thankyou for not judging me about the whole rape thing" "What do you mean Ruby?" Brax was confused "Well when people around here, like Martha, found out that Charlie had a kid when she was 14 everyone started to judge her calling her a slag and stuff like that. Charlie never wanted to tell anyone what happened to her and she was just taking the insults that people were throwing at her, but i couldn't stand back and watch that happen so there was this argument between Charlie and Martha and i accidently shouted it out and then Martha tried groveling to Charlie and pretended to be her best friend because she felt so guilty. Last year wasn't a good year for us" "Why didn't your mum want to tell people, like i understand it wouldn't be something to broadcast, but when people started to call her names? It just doesn't make sense as to why she'd take it, especially as she's a police officer as well, being so strong and all" Brax asked, concerned for his 'girlfriend' "Well, she felt dirty and cheap. She's never had a lot of relationships, for one she was scared that someone would do that to her again, thats why she became a police woman, to stop people feeling the same way she did and secondly she couldn't trust anyone, thats how i know that when she lets a man into her life, she must care about them a lot! The only one i know she said 'i love you' to was Angelo, but after they broke up she didn't seem that bothered by it, so i doubt she was actually in love, she just thought she was. So come to think to think of it, i don't think her acting like this could be about Angelo, now" "What do you mean acting like this?" Brax asked "Brax whats with all the questions man?" Casey asked his brother "Nah, i'm just interested, you would never think this would happen to someone like Charlie, she appears to be so strong" "It's all a front Brax believe me, underneath it all is how she really feels and when she finally lets a man know how she truly feels, that's when she is in love!" Ruby said
Zetti Posted May 29, 2011 Report Posted May 29, 2011 I love Ruby in this fic. She seems to have matured a lot. Its really endearing to read, it just brings through the caring side in her that I really like reading about. I am sensing that soon people will start to find out about Charlie and Brax. I wonder how Leah will actually react. Loved this part, looking forward to more.
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 29, 2011 Report Posted May 29, 2011 I loved it. A great chapter. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx
biancaliamca Posted May 29, 2011 Report Posted May 29, 2011 Talking to Leah about her situation, even if Leah didn't really understand, really helped her. It helped her to think about what she wanted. She wasn't ready to go public with Brax yet, and she didn't want a full on relationship yet, she wasn't ready to be girlfriend and boyfriend but she did know that she didn't want to stop seeing Brax, she was falling in love with him and she had to see where this could go. Charlie Buckton was putting herself first for once. When she got back into her house Charlie went into her bedroom and stripped off and put her robe on. She made her way to the utility room and put her very wet clothing into the washing machine. In all truthfulness Charlie was looking forward to this hot shower. She then her way to the shower room. --- Charlie felt fresh. She was now wearing a pair of leggings and a pj top. Her hair was still wet but put up into a messy bun. Charlie walked through into the kitchen to put the kettle on and then made her way back into the living room and put the television on. She lay down on the sofa and just about got comfy when she heard the kettle click which signalled that it was bolied. She got out a mug and poured 3 full teaspoons of coffee and then added the water and milk, she made her way back into the living room and put the cup on the table and sat back down again. Charlie noted that is was half past 2. Leah woulddn't be back until 6 and Ruby and Casey probably wouldn't be back for ages yet, so Charlie thought that she had time to sleep as she was extremely tired. Charlie had just about managed to shut her eyes when there was a knock on the door. At first, Charlie was hoping it was somebody that would give up but it got more and more persistant. "Alright alright i'm coming" Charlie was hoping it was nobody that important and as she thought she was looking horrendous with no effort made in her hair or clothes and with no make up on. "Brax" There was an awkward silence that lasted in reality only lasted a couple of seconds but to them it felt like a life time. Brax just smiled back up at Charlie. "What are you doing here, i thought you were working?" Charlie asked trying hard not to give away that she missed this man like crazy. "Ah, well i am, but it wasn't that busy so i thought Angelo could hold the fort for a little while while i snuck out to see you. Before you say anything, i know i said i'd give you space, but the truth is, i over heard Ruby and Casey talking about you, so i just thought i'd come round and see if you were ok?" Charlie moved to the side as it was still raining and Brax was wet through. Brax made his way through the door as Charlie shut it and ushered them both into the lounge. "What was Ruby saying?" "Nothing bad, just that you seemed upset earlier and was out in this weather by yourself and its getting dark already, so like i said, i was just making sure you were ok" "Thanks, and i'm fine" Charlie didn't mean to sound rude, but she didn't know what to say. "Is there anything else you wanted?" "You know what i want" Brax answered. Charlie sighed greatly and huffed as she fell back on to the sofa. "Brax, you really don't understand what you're doing to me!" "What do you mean?" "I'm a police officer! i know your not a criminal because i've gotten to know you and i don't just have sex with anyone, but all the others think you are, i could lose my job, I love my job. " "But why would you lose your job! We're not doing anything wrong at all! We're just two people that have fallen for one another!" Again, there was another awkward silence. "The only way this is going to work is if it stays between us two, at least for the time being, and no more lies!" Brax smiled, he was finally getting his girl."I mean it brax! if i find out that you've lied to me one more than we're over, no more chances, you got it!?" "I got it, now come here!" Brax plonked himself down on the sofa as well and pulled Charlies waist to himself so she was on top of his. The kiss deepend as Charlie tried to remove Brax's tight black tee over his head. "How about we move this to the bedroom?" Brax said in between kisses. Charlie could hardly reply as she was too wrapped up in kissing her man. "mmm" Charlie moaned into his mouth which spurred Brax on even more. Brax lifted up Charlie and she wrapped her legs around his waist as Braxs hands comfortably found her bottom and her arms wrapped around his neck. Once in the bedroom Brax kicked the door shut just incase they got visitors. Brax gently layed Charlie on to the bed and now Charlie could fully remove Braxs shirt and Brax removed Charlies and then started trailing kissed down her neck to her chest and one thing lead to another...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 29, 2011 Report Posted May 29, 2011 A nice update, well done. Love Carina xxx
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