lozlovesh&a Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 Ooh Leah knows! I hope Leah tells her she knows! Loved it. Continue soon please.
Dingo x Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 Leah knows! Wasn't expecting that. Good updates
teespazzr Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 Oh...I really like this story but can I give you some constructive critism?
biancaliamca Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 yeah of course, just don't be too mean haha, xxx
teespazzr Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 I'm never mean lol I just wanted to tell you to watch your spelling and grammar... Apart from that this is a fantastic story! I look forward to more... Are you on fanfiction(dot)net
biancaliamca Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 oh i know, i was re-reading it yesterday it's terrible, i'll have to proof read a lot next time ahha, and thankyou, there'll be an update tonight xxx
totally Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 I absolutely love it! I get the feeling you will give them some drama in one of the next updates... But I hope I'm wrong!
biancaliamca Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 "Morning" Charlie said walking in to the kitchen. Ruby and Leah were already up having their breakfast. "You've changed your tune since yesterday" Ruby said to her. "Well, some things just work out in the end don't they" Charlie said with a smile as she made her way to the kettle to make herself a cup of coffee. "So what you planing for today you two?" Charlie asked her daughter and her friend "Well i'm meeting up with Casey today, maybe go to his, what about you Leah?" Ruby asked, glad her mother was happy again. "I don't know yet, maybe meet up with Miles" "So you two are getting on well hhmm" Charlie asked "Yeah" "Good" "Is everything ok here Leah?" Charlie asked after noticing how cold she was being to her "Yeah sorry, i'm just in a funny mood, so what are you doing today?" Leah asked smiling up at Charlie. "Well actually Rubes, i wanted to see if you wanted to have lunch with me today at Angelo's" "Yeah, sounds good, can Case come, or is it just us two?" Ruby asked. "Nope, he can come, thats fine, so meet me at Angelos at about 1ish?" "Yes, sounds good. Right well i'm off to get ready" and Ruby left the kitchen and went into her bedroom. "Are you sure you're Ok Leah?" Charlie was worried that she may have done something to upset Leah as she certainly wasn't her normal self. "Were friends right?" Leah asked, the first time she looked up at Charlie and looked into her eyes "Of course we are, whats bought this on?!" "Theres no need to lie Charlie i saw you" Charlie was lost for words "You saw me? What are you on about?" "I saw you with Brax, i saw you in your room together in bed, then i saw him leaving last night" Charlie quickly got up and shut the kitchen door so Ruby couldn't hear anything just in case. "So? what are you going to say?" Charlie sat back down and put her head in her hands "oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, this can not be happening. Nobody was meant to find out yet, please leah you can't say anything to anyone, please! If it gets out i could lose my job, everyone will go against me, they all think Brax is a villain, please Leah, don't say a word! Please" Charlie pleaded. "Charlie, calm down, i'm not going to tell anyone, i'm just disappointed that you felt like you couldn't confide in me. I mean i'd understand if it was something little, but this Charlie!, i heard you both say it" "Say what?" Charlie looked up. "That you loved each other"
Zetti Posted May 31, 2011 Report Posted May 31, 2011 Good update! So Charlie knows that Leah knows about them both Looking forward to more soon xx
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