Inactive User Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Liked the last two chapters Nooo can't believe Angelo did that! Poor Nicole I agree with Pembie's comment. Come out of your hiding place and fix this or we will haunt you down... Update soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Oh boy.Angelo should not have done that.I don't know if there's any way back for him and Nicole now... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Poor Nicole ... & for her to see it as well. Bless her. It's going to be very difficult for them to regain even their friendship now, let alone start a relationship! Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Miranda Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Angelo, use the brain in your head not your other one! I think he might have gone too far for Nicole to take him back Oh, boo hoo Quote
Deano Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Angelo is such an idiot for doing something like that. Grr fight for her love Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Posted May 26, 2011 Oh good, so they're in the same room, they're talking, and they both seem calm enough. This is good, maybe. (Though maybe a blow-up row is excatly what they need ) My heart leaped when Angelo piped up in the doorway Bless him, wanting to reminisce with her. Sweet <3 Ohh Roman/Marilyn confrontation. Marilyn's right though, she has nothing left to lose, so there's not really much to stop her causing even more damage than she already has. BTW, I also think it's adorable that he feels like he's cheated on her when he actually hasn't. It shows how much he obviously loves her. (Also, I can't speak on behalf of the others reading, but I do trust you to give them a happy ending. That doesn't mean you will though, does it? You obviously like last minute twists, because you're evil and make me want to cry ) Anyway, fab chapter, Zetti Quote
Miranda Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Oh, Roman If only he'd come back to see Nic and Angelo in the series. I'd forgotten about his friendship with Miles, that came across well. I loved the way Miles shoved him out of the door when Angelo came in. I liked him realising Marilyn was more hurt. Great chapter. I do think your writing is improving all the time Hope that doesn't sound patronising Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 You really don't trust me to give Nic/Ange a happy ending do you? Um...on past experience? Good that Angelo came round and he and Nicole are talking, hope they sort everything out. Quote
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