HighwayUnicorn Posted June 10, 2011 Report Posted June 10, 2011 Don't you dare!! You had better make the reveal as part of the next chapter! Otherwise, I will hunt you down ... Another great chapter, fantastically written. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted June 10, 2011 Report Posted June 10, 2011 Great chapter. I agree with everyone's reviews You are a great writer. Looking forwards to read the next chapter soon Quote
Zetti Posted June 10, 2011 Report Posted June 10, 2011 Amy: simply because I can but I have had the reveal written since the beginning. It was meant to be the first chapter. Carina: if you hunt me down then you won't find out what really happens but the reveal will be next chapter whenever I post it Sarah: Thanks for that Again appreciate and I love reading yours comments Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Posted June 10, 2011 Amy: simply because I can but I have had the reveal written since the beginning. It was meant to be the first chapter. FIRST Chapter? As in 7 updates ago and 11 days ago? Well, now I'm fidgety. Is it time for the next chapter yet?! *whistles* Quote
Zetti Posted June 10, 2011 Report Posted June 10, 2011 that isn't going to make it come any quicker. You will have to be patient. Hard I know Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 11, 2011 Report Posted June 11, 2011 Oh yeah ... Well ... instead of hunting you down, how about I ... hmm ... ask you very nicely over facebook? Quote
Zetti Posted June 11, 2011 Report Posted June 11, 2011 Oh yeah ... Well ... instead of hunting you down, how about I ... hmm ... ask you very nicely over facebook? And you know what I said..... Sorry to anyone who thought this was the actual update Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 That was fantastically well-written but oh dear, that was a pretty bad thing Angelo did and I can understand why Nicole would be scared of him.I like the way you managed to show their differing perspectives on it and made both their actions understandable.Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Quote
Miranda Posted June 12, 2011 Report Posted June 12, 2011 Aha, so something is going on with Angelo Can't believe he'd attack her in his normal self? Or would he? I suppose this is a fic so he could be different. Hm... Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Posted June 12, 2011 OK, that's one of those chapters I can't individually quote because everything was happening. I'm glad you chose Nicole and Roo to have the conversation that ultimately would reveal it, because, with the current dynamic on screen, it's SO easy to picture. Extremely disappointed in Angelo. Alcohol or not, it's no excuse. Nicole must have been terrified. . It's ironic that he would scare her like that when she was only waiting up to make sure he arrived home safely too. I'm not surprised she took the children and left. I'm not sure, knowing the truth now, they can ever get back to the way things were. They may try, but that trust may never come back, particularly if she's going to keep living in fear that something like that can happen again. Even if she doesn't necessarily think it would and that she can trust him, she's got the children to consider as well (a point you're doing an amazing job of getting across.) Very inruiged to read the rest now. Another fab update, Zetti Quote
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