Revelations (by Zetti) - comments

[Lucii]

Oh Angelo how could you do that? Even if you were drunk

Nicole would have been really scared I mean the guy she loves attacks her god knows how she still let's him near the kids!

Update sooon! xx

[Zetti]

That was fantastically well-written but oh dear, that was a pretty bad thing Angelo did and I can understand why Nicole would be scared of him.I like the way you managed to show their differing perspectives on it and made both their actions understandable.Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Thanks Red. I didn't think it would come across as two different perspectives but I am glad you thought it did

Aha, so something is going on with Angelo Can't believe he'd attack her in his normal self? Or would he? I suppose this is a fic so he could be different. Hm...

Ah so you spotted it...there are a few more things to be revealed...

I'm not sure, knowing the truth now, they can ever get back to the way things were. They may try, but that trust may never come back, particularly if she's going to keep living in fear that something like that can happen again. Even if she doesn't necessarily think it would and that she can trust him, she's got the children to consider as well (a point you're doing an amazing job of getting across.)

Thanks Amy I am not promising a reunion but they might try...

god knows how she still let's him near the kids!

Thats why Roo is there..she doesnt trust him yet..

Thanks for reading, I was not sure how you were going to react to the reveal but I am glad it came across the way I wanted it to

[HighwayUnicorn]

Angelo should not have done that! Whether he was drunk or not!

Interesting to know why he was drunk 'again' though. If there were any underlying problems.

It's totally understandable why Nicole is scared of him though.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[pembie]

WELL DONE WITH THIS CHAPTER I KNOW PEOPLE HAVING BEEN WAITING A LONG TIME FOR THE REVEAL

Angelo that was pretty low of you he shouldnt of done that I lost abit of respect for him in that chapter but I do think theres more to this than meets the eye like why is he drunk a totally diffrent Angelo than we have seen before

I wait with baited breath for the other side of the story

[lozlovesh&a]

Hmmmm. I would be scared if I was Nicole! Silly Angelo. But if there is something else going on then he should tell her.

Continue please.

[Zetti]

Thanks.

There is a reason for Angelo being drunk again.

Again thanks for the comments. I will be updating tonight. Xx

[Miranda]

Oh, a mystery for us to find out. Poor old Angelo, what have you done to him Zetti

Good story tho

[xGlowingAngelx]

What have you done to him indeed.!?

I loved the opening scene between Roo and Roman.

I'm glad Angelo's not trying to excuse what he did and he sounds like he's taking responsibility for it, which is good. However, it makes Nicole determination to stay away from him, and keep the children away, seem twice as justified as it already was, especially if there's even the slightest fear in her mind that something like this may happen again. It must be such a fearful situation for her, and it's probably damaged a lot of the trust she has in him.

It's a tough situation too, because Nicole's been keeping the children away for their own protection and they're so young that they don't understand . I hope, for their sakes, this situation can at least be calmed somehow. Not necessarily through forgiveness, but at least through civilisation of some sort.

Heartbreak aside, that was a fabulous chapter.

[HighwayUnicorn]

I can totally understand both points of view but I think it says a lot about Angelo & the fact that he's not making excuses for what he did.

He was aware that he was drunk & obviously didn't know what he was doing & I'm glad he doesn't condone his behaviour.

So that was very well written, well done.

Loved Roman & Roo at the beginning.

& I completely agree with the above comment about the children & that they are so young & wouldn't understand the hurt & pain Nicole is going through.

& it will definitely take time for Nicole to completely trust him even around the children.

I look forward to more, well done.

Love Carina xxx

[Red Ranger 1]

I loved the chat between Roo and Angelo and the fact that she recognises that, however terrible what he did was, he's still a decent man underneath.Looking forward to finding out more!