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WHY did it take me so long to read this? I really have no clue. Sorry Zetti.

‘He is still unconscious, he has a bleed’

‘Bleed??’ Nicole stumbled over her words.

‘Where?’ she was genuinely confused, she berated herself for leaving him there.

‘In his stomach, it is most likely caused by the fall’

Blimey, get smack bang in with the drama, why don't you? LOL. Poor Rob!

Nicole closed her eyes. ‘Please save him, I need my baby’

Nicole was close to breaking down. Roo had to physically manoeuvre her to the chairs where Roman was sat with Mia.

‘They said they have to operate and that he might not survive the surgery’ she said as her body wracked with sobs.

Awww, Nic. Somebody give her a hug, please!!! <3

‘Does Angelo know?’ Roo asked hoping that Roman was not going to protest.

Roman protested ‘No, he doesn’t need to know’

Grr, Roman! I know you don't like the guy, but this is his son. Maybe not biologically, but he did raise him and he still has the right to know, at least in my opinion.

LOL at Angelo bumping stright into Roo.

I'd like to think Angelo wasn't making a dig when he said about the children being on his own. I think he was just expressing shock without putting his brain into gear first and realising it could be misinterpreted as a dig.

Angelo gasped as he stopped.

He might die.

I might never see him again

What the hell would I do without him?

I need him to be okay.

He lost the use of his legs and slumped against the wall. Somehow he managed to slide down the wall and he just sat there not knowing what else to do.

Awww. *Amy's little heart breaks*

Roo calling Rob a fighter <3

Loved Nic not being very subtle about wanting Roo to leave them alone a minute. I'm sure Roo would understand though.

Nicole looked at him. He looked so drained of energy. All of them had been through so much but they were still battling to see if Rob was going to survive.

'I know that you don't trust me.' Angelo started to say

'yet' Nicole said.

YET.

My little heart is jumping with joy at the possibility of them not divorcing. :wub:

The atmosphere was strained as the three of them drank their coffee. Looking over Roo's shoulder Angelo spotted Roman with Mia. Mia ran into Angelo's lap and buried her face into his chest. He instinctively placed his arms around her. Roman didn't acknowledge Angelo.

Mia <3

Mia sat up in Angelo's lap. He didn't want to let go of her yet and he was glad that she didn't try and get off his lap.

She did whisper into his ears and he looked at her.

'No. No one blames you' he said as he hugged her yet again.

Nicole gasped 'your dad is right.' she says as she sat next to Angelo.

'It is not your fault.' she said holding her arms out and allowed Mia to shuffle onto her lap. Nicole kissed her head and whispered just loud enough for Angelo to hear. She put her hand on his leg reassuringly as she spoke to Mia 'Mummy & Daddy love you & Rob.'

That whole part is ADORABLE. It's about the four of them, as a family, even if it's not a complete thing at the minute. There still a family, and I adore how you've put that there.

Angelo nodded and clearly could sense that Roman felt uncomfortable but he didn't care. He loved his family even if they were in tatters at the moment, they always came first.

Angelo, I <3 you.

She indicated yes and looked at her mother and father who both said yes.

That's such a parently thing, and I love it.

Nicole wanted to add that neither should Rob but she didn’t want to make the situation more strained than it actually needed to be.
**

I should hope she shouldn't need to say it anyway. None of them should be there, because this isn't something they should be going through, and it breaks my heart that they are. Now I want Rob out of surgery and safe and well, and I want them to try and regain some stability. I don't like them being all sad. :( (I mean, I do, because I love angst, as you know, but realistically, I'd like them happy :P) I'm still undecided on where you're going to take this though. The most obvious way to end it would be to have Rob safe and well and everyone end happily, but I know you ;) and I wouldn't be surprised if you threw a final spanner in the works. LOL.

I also realised that, during that, I <3'd Nicole, Roo, Mia and Angelo. LOL. I <3 them all, basically.

Another amazing update there, Zetti. Very excited to see where this goes and whether Rob makes it.

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Aww bless you Amy <3 & dont worry about not commenting earlier. :)

I will try & get an update up for tonight but no promises :) & I love the fact that you have no idea how it will end :P means I am successful in my quest to keep it a secret :P

& there is only 3 parts left :(

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But they couldn’t ignore the gnawing feeling in the back of their head that maybe there wasn’t going to be a happy ending.

You see that line right? Yeah, that's the one, the one above. Do you know that's exactly how your readers feel?

But do you care? No. Of course you don't. & why not? Oh really? You want to torture us?

Well, if that's the way you want it ...

I could probably do a lot worse on my fic, you know ...

But did you know just how amazing that chapter was? Yes? You do? Goody. That's officially a cop out for me leaving an essay for you which is quite convenient.

Would you really hurt one of the children ... even I can't answer that question because I have no idea what you are capable of.

But surely you're not that heartless? You're not? Good! Then kills someone like ... like ... Roo?

Because you can't kill off Rob ... so Roo could take his place ...

Update soon if you don't mind ...

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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I second that... Kill Roo... We've had that discussion before....

In fact if you keep using me for creative advice I'm going to have to insist on it... :ph34r:

And don't forget you dont' want me to kill off certain people in MH... I think we can do a deal.... don't you?

Tele

PS Update now if not sooner.....

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Awww, only 3 parts left. that will be a sad moment, when it all ends. I've loved reading this so much.

'You need counselling' Nicole mentioned to Angelo about half an hour later just after Roo and Roman took Mia home.

Angelo frowned at Nicole's response as they left the canteen and made their way to the waiting room as they waited for Sid. Angelo didn't even try and hide his surprise. He never expected that and Nicole knew that it was a shock to him.

'What?'

'You heard me. You need to come to terms with it all. Move on.'

I actually think that's a good idea. Even if he wants to make things right, he's still living with the torment, which has been obvious all along. Counselling might actually do him good, so long as he's willing to do that of his own accord.

Nicole tried not to react. She wanted him to move on because if he didn't then she wouldn't be able to either and she needed to move on.

Spot on. And if neither of them are moving on, the kids have no chance.

Somehow the fact that she knew in advance about the wires didn't help her process it because she gasped out of fear and shock.

Understandable. I don't think any parent could prepare for that sight.

Angelo stood at the foot of the bed with tears flowing. Nicole knew that he was reliving his own coma experience and she touched his arm just to let him know that he wasn’t alone before moving away from him slightly

I like how subtle that was. <3

DOCS had been in touch but they agreed with the preliminary findings that Rob had hurt himself with the fall accidentally.

They had to get a statement from Rob but as far as they were concerned that was a formality.

Good! After everything they've already been through, the added stress of concerns from DOCS would have been too much.

'To be honest, I don't know. I mean at first I was angry and the anger took over but I wasn't that bothered because I wasn't sad but now I can't get rid of this empty void inside me. All because of that one night!'

:( Angelo. That's so sad.

She wished with all her heart that Rob was going to be okay because she had no idea how anyone was going to cope if it wasn't.

Understandable. I don't know how I'd cope, and I'm in no way related/connected to this fictional child. :P LOL.

I *adored* Roo andRoman mirroring the line about Rob being a fighter. That's why they're so perfect together. <3

I love how concerned Roo is for Angelo.

Mia had been crying as it was evident from her red raw face. ‘I want mummy’

Roo picked her up and sat on the bed with her ‘I know you do darling’

Mia rested her head on Roo’s shoulders and sniffed ‘Is Rob going to be coming home soon?’

Mia :( She must be so confused and scared.

Roman nodded and then they both just sat there in silence, not knowing what was going to happen but they both just wanted everything to be okay but they couldn’t ignore the gnawing feeling in the back of their head that maybe there wasn’t going to be a happy ending.

DON'T SAY THAT. We need POSITIVITY, people!!! Stay Positive <3

3 parts to give them a happy ending, I think we can do it, but can we?!!!!! Only you can tell us, Zetti.

Another amazing update. :)

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Angelo should take Nicole's advice and get some counselling.Hopefully he won't end up needing even more counselling.I've no idea whether Rob's going to make it or not, hope he does...

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Why would Roo be killed?? No. Roo is fantastic. I don't want Rob to die either. :( But I have a feeeling that is going to happen. Sadness. :(

Continue please.

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