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THEY WERE MARRIED?! :o:blink: Did I miss that? Forget that? Or is that just the first time we've heard it? I don't remember reading that, and if so, I need to go and have a re-read! I thought they'd just been in a relationship. Pay attention, Amy!

Anyway, here goes....

He couldn’t blame her, all he seemed to do was hurt her, and it physically hurt him to see her so angry and upset all because of his own actions.

He couldn’t excuse them but he couldn’t explain them either, it was too hard for him to actually contemplate a life without her and the children.

Awww. Angelo. I know what he did must have been horrible, whatever it was, but I still feel a little bad for him, since he seems so cut up about it himself.

Nicole’s anger began to surface. ‘And the scars that you left both emotionally and physically are fair!’ she retorted. ‘I could have coped on my own without the children if you had kept on hurting me but it is not just me that it affects'

Sadly, this is why I fear Loz may be right too. :(

A few minutes she heard the door close. She text her Dad and sent it.

He’s gone, let the kids come home. I need a hug from them x

Sweet! :wub: Poor Nicole, though.

Angelo smiled as she looked at him with her light blue eyes, he still couldn’t believe that she was here.

I don't know if I'm meant to feel sorry for Angelo, but I can't help it. I feel sorry for them all.

‘We have been separated for a year; I think it’s time for us to get a divorce’

....and when I though this couldn't get any sadder, it did. :(

Fabulous update though, You make the wait for updates, no matter how long, totally worth it. Very excited for the reval next chapter.

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Thanks for the awesome comments. I am not doing this on purpose but I am not going to reveal it till part eight. The next part is going to be too long and confusing if I post it with the reveal but I do appreciate the comments :wub:

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Not doing it on purpose? Yeah right! You want to keep us in suspense for as long as possible don't you?!

Unbelievable! Absolutely shocking & appalling behaviour Zetti.

Only joking .... :wink::lol:

LOL Carina. :lol:

OK, Another part to get through before the reveal. I'm all for that, since I'm just excited for any chapters we get. That will only increase my intrigue though :P

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