HighwayUnicorn Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 Oh wow ... Indi! & Heath! That was brilliant. Such a hilarious chapter. Really well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 19, 2011 Report Posted August 19, 2011 Oh my.I'm laughing.Elijah calling Miles his arch enemy.Charlie's not-so-secret affair with Brax.Heath turning into a wolf to scare Brax into backing down.Elijah not shaking Heath's hand."It's not every day you can say something like that, is it?" Quote
JosieTash Posted August 19, 2011 Report Posted August 19, 2011 Oh man !!! this is just soooooooo out there and funny !!!!!!! …… especially ………….. Miles, “Cant he do it another night? Its VJ’s birthday” Heath, “Werewolf eh who’s a werewolf?” Elijah, “Shut up I have sinned I need to take a bath in gallons of holy water now” Watson, “Oh shut up Elijah I’m just window shopping” Charlie, “No his not I wouldn’t mind you too Heath…………….””WHAT AM I Saying? Watson I don’t know what you are talking about. I am not having a secret affair with Brax that is so laughable” Elijah, “The bucket would be faster, now I command you Mr Stewart by the power of God to hand over the bucket or feel his anger” Brax, “F…F…..F….Fine Y….Y…You c….c….can be the leader of the River Boys” Charlie, “I have hay in places I didn’t know were possible to get it in you kinky boy” Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 20, 2011 Report Posted August 20, 2011 I read this last night but didn't comment, sorry. That was another brilliant chapter. So fantastically written. You always add so much humour into your stories. Well done. I loved that update. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 31, 2011 Report Posted August 31, 2011 Oh man.Loved Charlie and Brax's phone conversation.The woman really does seem to have no brain at times... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 31, 2011 Report Posted August 31, 2011 Charlie and Brax's phone conversation! Fantastic! I loved it. Another amazing chapter, well done. Carina xxx Quote
JosieTash Posted September 1, 2011 Report Posted September 1, 2011 This is just too funny !!!!!!! …… especially ….. stupendously clueless Charlie !!!!!! Brax, “Heath dude actually this is a good workout think of the calories I have lost while you have been chasing me The entire ““Why would I even think about eating my phone?” chat Indi, “Oh thanks shall I just wear a bin liner then?” Heath, “Babe it’s funny really I eat my phone for a dare and now it smells because I puked it up” Sid, “You eat a casserole which was posted?” Quote
Guest Posted September 1, 2011 Report Posted September 1, 2011 It just read all the chapters this is a great fan fic please continue Quote
Miranda Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Posted September 5, 2011 Haha, I can't pick out all the funny bits, it was all too funny, but Elijah shaking Heath's willy! Brax writing a novel and being in a writer's group! Quote
Guest Posted September 15, 2011 Report Posted September 15, 2011 Wow great ending I hope you write another fan fic Quote
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