Angel90 Posted June 24, 2011 Report Posted June 24, 2011 Read this before but didnt get a chance to comment... Great chapter cant wait for more... Wonder what Brax's mum guna say about him and Charlie Quote
elikell Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Great update. Loved it immensely. I felt so sorry for Charlie. You wrote her pain and anguish so well. It was just beautiful. Lovely chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 (edited) Aw that was really so beautiful! The love that they felt for one another was conveyed through every word! It was simply beautiful! Looking forward to then next chapter miziette! Edited June 25, 2011 by LauraPhilly!! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Another amaizng chapter. I felt incredibly sorry for Charlie & you portrayed her emotions so perfectly; vulnerable. It came across well in your writing. Amazingly well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Lucii Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Loved that chapter it was soo sweet! Update soon x Quote
Zetti Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Wow. That was a beautiful chapter. Amazing Quote
Angel90 Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Awwww... Loved that chapter... So much emotion... and nicely written... More plz... Quote
Lucii Posted June 26, 2011 Report Posted June 26, 2011 oooh so Cheryl has it in for poor Charlie! Atleast Brax stoof up to her Cant wait for more x Quote
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