Lucii Posted July 5, 2011 Report Posted July 5, 2011 Twinsies! Yaaay! This is gonna be sooo cute...can't wait for more x Quote
Lucii Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 What a cute chapter 4 cheesburgers! Loved that part Cannot wait for more x Quote
elikell Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Four cheeseburgers! I guess she's got a point, eating for three. Adds a nice bit of humour in there So glad that Charlie seems to be happy. And getting married. Interested to see who the man in Leah's house is... Update soon please Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Loved it! Can't wait for the actual wedding! I love the cheeseburger part too! It was very funny! Really can't wait for the next chapter! It's going to be adorable! Quote
Arielxo Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Loved it!(: If the stranger at Leah's house is Drew Curtis you will officially be my hero! Quote
soph1303 Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Amazing chapter. Loved all the stuff about eating for 3. And all the wedding stuff too. In fact that chapter was just awesome the whole way through!! I was also wondering if it might be Drew- that could be interesting if it is. Update soon please - I want a Chax wedding!! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Awww, a boy & a girl! & the chesseburger bit was hilarious! Aha. Fantastic. I loved that chapter. Absolutely fantastic, well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
callyha Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 Just looked back at the entire fic and realised I haven't commented on any of them since ages ago. Really sorry. So: #42 'damn it Charlie, I know how to breath' Brax gasped 'I've been doing it for thirty years' this made me laugh, loved it. I loved the way you wrote this chapter, and the imagery you painted with Charlie drawing in the journal Brax! Bless him! #49 I loved how you wrote Brax 'seeing' Charlie in the room after seeing her that day. Charlie's conflicts with how she was/is feeling over Heath was well written, I loved the ending....is it Brax she's calling?? Hope so! #57 Very powerfully written. I'm glad Charlie and Brax spoke -at least they both know that they are battling with the same confusing thoughts over Heath. The whole urn thing with Joel in is beautiful. And the ending with the scattering of Joel -Wow, beautiful #65 I'm glad Charlie and Brax are slowly rekindling their friendship. Ruby and Casey trying to figure it out is funny, especially 'Just saying, maybe they really are at each others throats, just not in the way we think' Casey raised his shake in a toast before taking a sip #75 Liked the way you said about the outside worl been beautiful and Charlie's inner world falling apart. And the noodle making LOVED it and again, with Casey and Ruby trying to figure it out. And Leah! oh dear, Charlie burning her hair! #85 Great chapter, like how Charlie and Brax are slowly working on things #93 Oh Colleen! She never changes! I loved the Charlie and Brax sundae bit, and how Leah and Colleen were watching closely to see it all! #100 I can picture the bit where Brax is still holding Charlie -just shows how well you write. Love Leah's comment about living there, and how Casey and Ruby are wanting to ask them, but darent #106 Finally! Charlie and Brax are public! Glad ruby is happy that Charlie is happy. Wonder what Cheryl is gonna do.... #116 Wow! That first bit -powerful, I can see it in my head. And the bedroom with Charlie and Brax....Steamy! I feel for Charlie and her insecurities over her scars, and you've captured that beautifully #125 Charlie and Brax are moving in together! Cheryl really doesn't like Charlie! At least Brax stood up for her! #135 Cheryl really has it in for charlie! and now those pictures reminding Charlie! and just as charlie and Brax are moving forward, Watson and Angelo spoil it! #141 He was gonna propose! Grr! Watson #152 Its good that Watson is doing her job, but at the expense of Charlie and Brax! I like how your writing Watson #160 Charlie and Brax's encounter on the beach -Loved the awkwardness which just shows how attracted to each other they are to be with anyone else! #168 Had to laugh at the image I had of the three of them falling together! And I can picture charlie and Ruby sitting on the couch and looking at the ring and talking about it all #179 Charlie weilding the lamp! OMG major stitch when I read that! I could see it....I keep saying that, but I honestly can. Awww he proposed to her! I loved how they commemorated Joel's death and how it was a day like when they scattered him. Loved the talk about the empire and the grandbabies and the kids, and how they interupted and mocked each other #191 This chapter LOVE. It was sooooooooooooooooo sweet and I just love Chax! And Ruby tripping, adding the comedic value which I love #200 Ruby's well into the idea of the wedding, even though its annoying Charlie, memories of Ross and Morag's wedding pop into mind where Ruby was a 'monster'. Yay! She's pregnant! But, I like how you've mentioned Joel and how she's worried about history repeating itself #208 TWINS!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwwww. If it weren't for the Cheryl bit, this would have been the happiest chapter. Still great though! #217 I loved this chapter. The descriptions of all the dresses -lovely. and the comedic bit again -this time Charlie and her food HAHA love it! Quote
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