HighwayUnicorn Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Posted June 2, 2011 Wow, the abuse part was quite harrowing & it made me cringe ... the signs of you being a good writer. Another great update but I do hope that Laura keeps in contact with Nate. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted June 2, 2011 Report Posted June 2, 2011 Well done really good The abuse scenes were written perfect very intense and creepy. I'm not saying the whole thing wasn't written really good because it was but like Carina said the abuse scenes made me cringe as I read them. poor Aden hope Laura gets help I pat you on the back for the great work your doing on this fic Quote
Zetti Posted June 2, 2011 Report Posted June 2, 2011 Thank you so much for those comments. It is those types of comments that make me want to write more Thanks for reading. I truly appreciate it Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Posted June 3, 2011 Hmmm, it makes me think that there's something more than just a stomach bug that Holly seems to have. Love the comment about the laptop, that made me laugh. Typical, Aden avoiding the subject. Quote
pembie Posted June 4, 2011 Report Posted June 4, 2011 Really liked the laptop saga there I know that feeling when comupters freeze too it's very annoying I preidict the sound of patters of tiny feet for Holly soon Quote
Zetti Posted June 4, 2011 Report Posted June 4, 2011 Thanks you two I will update in a few days. And pembie it isn't a pregnancy... But feel free to speculate Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Posted June 4, 2011 Oh, I thought she was pregnant as well Quote
Zetti Posted June 4, 2011 Report Posted June 4, 2011 ^ Nah.. I wasnt going to make it something that obvious. I will be updating later on if I get this chapter done : ) Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Posted June 4, 2011 Oh dear, seems unfair that Dean doesn't have to apologise. I wonder what's wrong with Holly ... I hope she'll be okay. I look forward to more. Update soon. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted June 5, 2011 Report Posted June 5, 2011 hmmmmmm interesting chapter Holly started to feel ill in chapter 19 with a small stomach pains and now blurred vision and dizzyness is it something to do with the drugs she's taken Dean getting off with the fight with Nate's not fair can't wait for more Quote
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