HighwayUnicorn Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Liked how Ruby said that it was better for everyone to hear the whole truth from her. You know what Colleen would be like otherwise, gossiping around the Bay. Loved her being speechless though, it added a bit of humour into a sad chapter. Well done. A great update. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted June 17, 2011 Report Posted June 17, 2011 I agree with most of the other comments. I'm glad that Ruby read out the letter, rather than half telling a story, or having a go at her mother. And that she let everyone process things. I feel sorry for Ruby for what she must've gone through reading that letter for herself, and then out loud. It'd be something you'd never want to really read. But I'm glad Ruby put her feelings of anger aside and went with just the truth. I think it shows how mature she has become. Really sad but beautiful chapter. Please update soon. Quote
soph1303 Posted June 18, 2011 Report Posted June 18, 2011 Not really sure what I want to do with the rest of this fic, but I think that I'm only going to do a few more chapters. I will try and update soon - but I'm bit busy with school work at the minute, so it might be another few days before I post the next chapter. Quote
ldscott Posted June 18, 2011 Report Posted June 18, 2011 ok, practically in tears now! Amazing chapter, and love how Ruby finally told everyone how she felt about Charlie. Lisa x Quote
Inactive User Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Great chapter. Wonder how Grant will react when he learns he has a daughter?? Looking forwards to next chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
ldscott Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Great chapter, you are able to write Ruby's feelings so well! Lisa x Quote
Lucii Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Aw I really feel sorry for Ruby reading this, And Angelo! Can't wait to see Grant's reaction to this but I hope Ruby doesn't chicken out and believe everything he tells her! Can't wait for more xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Nicely written, liked the imagery of Ruby watching the old videos and seeing the connection between them.And woah at her going to see Grant, not sure that's a good idea, looking forward to seeing what happens. Quote
pembie Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Ruby gone to see Grant not sure this is wise liked the home videos part nice touch look forward to more only 2 more chapters Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Oh wow. Ruby going to find him might not be a good idea ... but at least she has Angelo's support. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
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