Danni02 Posted May 6, 2011 Report Posted May 6, 2011 Great chapter! Poor Charlie thinking about Ruby! It must be so hard for her not having her in her life. Grr Heath, go away! Okay so it wasn't nice of Brax to let him take the blame, but still, Heath, just grr! lol. I hope he doesnt hurt Charlie or Maisy! Update soon! Quote
callyha Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Awww that image at the end! Poor Charlie,thinking about Ruby Heath! Naff off! maybe Brax shouldn;t have letyou take therap, but he had Charlie and Maisy to thnk about.....just Naff off! More sooooon please Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 Oooh. I wonder does Heath go after Ruby or Maisy? I wish Heath would go away no matter how hot he is! Update please. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 7, 2011 Report Posted May 7, 2011 That preview has left me worrying who Heath's going to hurt or go after, etc. Another amazing chapter & I look forward to more. Beautifully written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Zetti Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Posted May 7, 2011 Damn! You make it impossible to like Heath.... I hope he doesnt hurt Charlie or Maisie More soon x Quote
Lucii Posted May 8, 2011 Report Posted May 8, 2011 Loving it! and the reference to high school musical was cute! Bad heath! :@ don't touch Charlie or Maisy! xx Quote
Summer2011 Posted May 14, 2011 Report Posted May 14, 2011 Heyy thanks everyone for all the comments means alot! Sorry if yous think this is an update, but really busy atm with revision for my exams, but hoping to get chapter 4 up tonight x x Quote
callyha Posted May 15, 2011 Report Posted May 15, 2011 Nice chapter. Poor Charlie and Brax ; but at least Maisy is with family (strange to say that I know, but MAYBE Heath wont hurt her...) Hopefully she is returned soon. More soon please Quote
Danni02 Posted May 15, 2011 Report Posted May 15, 2011 Poor Charlie, Brax and Maisy! I agree with Cally though, As dodgy as Heath could be, I don't think he would hurt a little girl. Hoepfully Brax can find a way to get money so they can get their little girl back! Update soon Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 15, 2011 Report Posted May 15, 2011 Although Heath is a little dodgy, I doubt he would hurt Maisy, especially because she's family. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
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