soph1303 Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Great update, Charlie and Angelo pulling over Nicole for driving without a license - I remember when that happened in the show lol. Brax met Angelo in that chapter but didn't meet Charlie - shame!! But they will meet, I will just have to be patient. Lol at the Braxton's trying to talk Angelo out of giving them a ticket. And it was Heath who noticed Charlie not Brax, hmm very interesting. More soon please Quote
Arielxo Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Hahaha.. Keith offering Brax a massage, too funny! Awesome update, loved the interaction between the boys and Angelo. Looking forward to more Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 17, 2011 Author Report Posted August 17, 2011 I apologise for not commenting sooner, I had a few chapters to catch up on there. All of them were so brilliantly written. Your portrayal of the characters is brilliant. And I love you style of writing in terms of portraying emotions as well. Really well done and I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Another wonderful update. I too, remember when they pulled up Nicole for driving without a licence. Great that you incorporated that into this story. Love where you're taking this. It's something different. Very enjoyable to read. Pity Brax didn't meet Charlie then, but I'm hoping at some stage they will. Can't wait to see where you take this next. Update soon please Quote
Angel90 Posted August 18, 2011 Report Posted August 18, 2011 Oh this sounds intreasting... I always wanted to kow how Brax and Charlie first met and how they got to know eachother... First time Brax and Charlie meet and theny dont even meet... This was a well written chapter... Keith and the surfing in the dark hahahha made me laugh Update soon plz Quote
Allways-smiling Posted August 18, 2011 Report Posted August 18, 2011 Love how your story connects to the show Quote
EmyKate68 Posted August 18, 2011 Report Posted August 18, 2011 A brilliant engaging story. This would totally make an excellent spin off series for Channel 7! The linking up with past H&A storylines is genius! Really love it. Quote
Angel90 Posted August 19, 2011 Report Posted August 19, 2011 That chapter was brilliant... Hahahaha Brax and Joey... Couldnt stop laughing.. Hahaha Heath helping a damsel in destress... Tegan getting jealous... Brax caring about Mrs Stevens was so cute... Update soon plz... Quote
elikell Posted August 19, 2011 Report Posted August 19, 2011 Aww, another wonderful update! Brax and Joey was just too funny. Poor Mrs Stevens. Glad Brax is there to help her out. Teagan all jealous...if only she knew! lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please Quote
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