elikell Posted August 20, 2011 Report Posted August 20, 2011 Loved it! Darcy in the car was just too cute. A whole pitcher of lemonade indeed! Very amusing. Glad that Heath is teaching Darcy how to surf and that the idea of being her dad is planted in his mind. I just hope he can stick with it and be there for her more permanently. Brax helping Mrs Stevens Glad that he can help her out. Love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please Quote
Angel90 Posted August 20, 2011 Report Posted August 20, 2011 Darcy is brilliant... Love her... Heath sounds like a great dad... Tegan should just tell him he already seems to know... Looking forward to the next chapter... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 20, 2011 Author Report Posted August 20, 2011 I love Darcy ... and I quite liked Heath in that chapter too. That was a fantastic chapter and I really enjoyed it. Well done. I lok forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Allways-smiling Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 Love Darcy she's so cute, and heath is a adorable daddy Quote
soph1303 Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 Sorry that I missed two updates, they were both great. Poor Brax crushing on Joey, the one person who will never like him back. Glad that he and Teagan argued - I'm back to disliking her again. Glad that Brax was looking out for his neighbour. Aww heath teaching darcy to surf was cute. I'm glad that heath suspects that he is actually her dad. Lol at what Darcy said when Jack and Angelo pulled Heath over More soon please Quote
ldscott Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 Just caught up with this, loving it so far. Darcy is so cute! Can't wait to read more Lisa x Quote
alice93 Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 Great chapter Loved Charlie's sharp tongue. And the initial respect that Brax had with the police officer, that is so like him! Jake is a real piece of work! Absolutely amazing as usual, update soon Quote
Angel90 Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 One Word... Brilliant... Liked the ending about Charlie's feelings... We never really got that in the show... Hahahha Heath arrested AGAIN.. Made me laugh... Many more to come... Update soon plz Quote
alice93 Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 Great chapter Loved Charlie's sharp tongue. And the initial respect that Brax had with the police officer, that is so like him! Jake is a real piece of work! Absolutely amazing as usual, update soon Quote
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