elikell Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Very well written! Heath getting arrested. Charlie's feelings. Everything was just amazing. Apart from Jake and co bagging out Jack, that was just wrong! Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please Quote
Arielxo Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Awesome Chapter!(: Poor Case, hating on school Loved the interaction between Charlie and Brax. Lol she was such a bitch when she first came to the bay. Looking forward to more Quote
soph1303 Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Great update, Aww Jack just died! Now I'm sad . Can't believe that Jake and his gang would be so disrespectful to joke about it though. Glad that Brax and the riverboys didn''t. And ooh, the first meeting of Charlie and Brax!! Yay! Loved Charlie's sarcasm, but can't really blame her though. More soon please Quote
Allways-smiling Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Aww poor Brax wants in lol Love your story Quote
soph1303 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Great update, Nice touch bringing Heath and Suzy into it, And it was Brax who got Joey the pawn trawler job - nice!! Poor Brax, he likes Joey but Joey is never going to like him the same way More soon please Quote
Angel90 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Brax get over Joey... Or get a sex change Loved this chapter Heath and Brax are really cute as brothers... looking forward to the next update... Quote
alice93 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Love the friendly banter, and nice to see that Brax has got his morals! Aww Braxy goes all week at the knees for Joey, if only he knew that she was about to fall for his future girlfriend hehe. Absolutely love this, you've got Brax and Heath's characters down to a T xD Quote
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