Chickiboomxx Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 You posted another chapter! I was getting worried about you... Another fantastic update as always! I can't wait for more! xxx Quote
Angel90 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 That was brilliant... Hahaha Brax catching Charlie was brilliant... Awww Joey has gone it was kinda cute... Glad Heath mentioned Angelo shooting Jack... Looking forward to the next chapter Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 15, 2011 Author Report Posted September 15, 2011 That was beautifully written ... really looking forward to more after that. Really well done. Carina xxx Quote
EmyKate68 Posted September 15, 2011 Report Posted September 15, 2011 Another fantastic update. The last paragraph was my favourite - great insight into Brax's character and how he feels about his mess of a life. I can't help but feel sorry for him Quote
soph1303 Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Great update, So Brett just ran over Charlie with his car - if i remember correctly it was this that caused Charlie's secret about Ruby being her daughter to come out - so it will be interesting to see if you incorporate that at all and the Braxton's perspective on it all. Aww poor Brax feeling guilty at the end , More soon please Quote
Allways-smiling Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Oh how I've missed your story, love it update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 Great update, Aww I felt sorry for Teagan seeing Grant again. But obviously I feel more sorry for Charlie and Ruby, because they're the ones he's gonna be harrassing, Heath comforting Teagan was cute , Ooh the ending sounds interesting, but sorry Brax, Ross is the one who's gonna kill Grant, not you! More soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 17, 2011 Author Report Posted September 17, 2011 Oooh the ending ... looking forward to seeing were you take this as well ... loved the emotion in that chapter too. Really amazing, well done. Carina xxx Quote
Allways-smiling Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Omg I love your stories more more more Brax is so cool, Heath soft side awwww Quote
Inactive User Posted September 19, 2011 Report Posted September 19, 2011 Omg! I liked this fanficiton. Please update soon xx Quote
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