soph1303 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Posted September 19, 2011 Great update, Liked Heath and Brax talking about Grant getting killed. Sorry boys - Ross got there first!! lol at Robertson and Brax's conversation. The ending of that chapter was funny . More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted September 20, 2011 Report Posted September 20, 2011 (edited) Great update Glad Grant's dead. Liked how Heath and Brax were talking about it Update soon xx Edited September 20, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 21, 2011 Author Report Posted September 21, 2011 I enjoyed that chapter ... I loved the structure of writing in that update. Really well written, well done. Carina xxx Quote
soph1303 Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Great update!! So Brax has put two and two together and realized that Charlie was the girl that Tegan saw Grant rape. It must be weird for him to find out that the girl he always pitied is someone that he actually knows. I kinda felt sorry for Teagan in that chapter. I could understand where she was coming from. But Brax is right though, Just because someone looks like they have it all sorted, doesn't mean that they do. The end was sad, with Brax watching Charlie being sad. More soon please Quote
teespazzr Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Aww! Brax is sweet in his own way... Quote
Arielxo Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Amazing chapter! Love Love Love this story. Looking forward to more! Quote
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Fab chapter! Update soon xx Quote
Inactive User Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 (edited) Great chapter but aww really sad and heart-breaking You wrote it really good. Update soon xx Edited September 24, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
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