Arielxo Posted October 1, 2011 Report Posted October 1, 2011 Poor Case being an outsider in his own home Wonder what Brax is up to ..? Awesome chapter, More soon please Quote
cb2180 Posted October 1, 2011 Report Posted October 1, 2011 Great chapter, wasn't expecting his sister! Quote
Arielxo Posted October 2, 2011 Report Posted October 2, 2011 Loved that Brax's first girlfriend became a cop. Very clever I have always thought that the writers/producers would bring in a half brother/sister of the Braxtons; so im really looking forward to how you integrate Danielle into your story. Update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted October 2, 2011 Report Posted October 2, 2011 Great chapter. Well done Update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted October 3, 2011 Report Posted October 3, 2011 Great two updates!! In the first one I loved you bringing Heath into Minks shopping spree that she had when she stole the money that Xavier was left by Hugo. And Casey and Stu's different point of views of being a riverboy. After reading the second update I'm guessing Brax was sneaking off to see his little sister, because it's too early for him and Charlie yet. Tut tut! Brax in a cell in the second update!! But Brax kind of having a crush on Charlie already despite the fact that she is a cop was good. Nice touch bringing Fitzy back into it and her and Brax seeing each other again. Aww Brax having a little sister is cute!! More soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted October 4, 2011 Report Posted October 4, 2011 Great update, Lol that would totally be how Heath would react to finding out news like that ! ooh he's going on a surfing circuit with Mink, could be interesting!! Good on Danielle for diffusing the awkwardness with some humor. More soon please Quote
Arielxo Posted October 4, 2011 Report Posted October 4, 2011 Great Chapter. 'Maybe this would be less awkward than he thought. After all, they did already know each other' - So Casey already knows Danielle? Looking forward to more Quote
cb2180 Posted October 4, 2011 Report Posted October 4, 2011 Great chapter, hope Heath comes back to meet his sister! Quote
Inactive User Posted October 5, 2011 Report Posted October 5, 2011 Great chapter More soon pleasee xx Quote
cb2180 Posted October 6, 2011 Report Posted October 6, 2011 Looking forward to the next chapter! Quote
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