Inactive User Posted November 4, 2011 Report Posted November 4, 2011 Great chapter Interesting twist you had written there so far-Brax and Ross meeting for the first time Update soon xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Great update, Wow, that's not good news about Danielle, but at least she's not dead! So Brax found his dad. Poor Brax, I felt sorry for him in that update, Nice link making it the center that Ross was at, and it was a nice talk that the pair of them had. Loved the ending - Brax, that girl is the girl that you are destined to fall in love with, ok? !! More soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Posted November 5, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited November 20, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Inactive User Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Great chapter Can't wait to see how Casey reacts to Brax telling him about their father. Update soon xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Great update, Glad that Danielle got to meet her father. Even if her father is a complete jerk! Good to see Braxton brother bonding in that chapter! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Great chapter So sad about the ending Update soon xx Quote
Arielxo Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Aw, so sad Poor Danielle. Im glad she got to meet her Dad and Heath like she wanted. Love this story, your writing is AH-MAY-ZINGGG! Looking forward to the next chapter Quote
Shezza Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 OMG that last paragraph was so beautifully written. Poor Danielle . I wonder what will happen next Great Writing Quote
soph1303 Posted November 8, 2011 Report Posted November 8, 2011 Great chapter, Glad that the Braxton brothers told their dad where they stood on him being in their lives. So glad that Heath and Danielle got to meet before she passed. The last paragraph was so sad, but really well written!! Really hope that at some point Brax finds out about Charlie and Danielle being friends, because I reckon he would respect Charlie heaps if he finds out. More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted November 8, 2011 Report Posted November 8, 2011 Great update. More soon please xx Quote
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