elikell Posted July 5, 2011 Report Posted July 5, 2011 Loved it. As usual. I'm so glad that Mrs Stevens is nice to them. They need someone like her in their lives. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. I'm liking Brax going to Summer Bay. Links it in nicely to the show now Please update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted July 5, 2011 Report Posted July 5, 2011 Good chapter . Liked the fact that it was Sally that Brax bumped into. And that Brax knew even then that he wanted to live in Summer Bay when he was older. Really enjoying this story - update soon!! Quote
elikell Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 The story of Pee Wee, I like it. And how the River Boys got their name. Love how you incorporated Wilsons beach. I do hope that they can get back to Summer Bay though at some stage. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 (edited) Great chapter. Loving the whole sort of backstory to the riverboys idea. Good way for them to get their name. I also hope that they go back to Summer Bay. Even though I know she wouldn't live in the bay yet - I really want Charlie to come into the story. Sorry I'm just a self-admitted Chax fan!! Anyway - great chapter, more soon please. Edited July 6, 2011 by soph1303 Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted July 6, 2011 Report Posted July 6, 2011 I really love the whole backstory of the characters! That was unreal how they conquered Wilsons! The Brax is this story is very similar to the real Brax which is great! Being a surfing legend and all! Great chapter! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Posted July 6, 2011 & so my opinion of Cheryl still has not changed. I just really don't like her. But ... Brax & Sally ... interesting idea there ... Loved the character interaction as per usual & it was very well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 Wow, Cheryl seemed almost human there for a while... Casey is walking now That was so cute. And poor Heath not understanding about the drugs conversation. Please update soon. I like this story a lot. Quote
soph1303 Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 I almost felt kinda sorry for Cheryl in that chapter. Casey was so cute starting to walk, and aww why couldn't older Heath be as nice as he was when was young like this? Anyway great chapter - I look forward to more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Posted July 7, 2011 You are so good at writing that you actually made me feel a bit sorry for Cheryl. Although it's still no excuse. She does need to step up & be a mum. Better late than never, hey? Very well written once again. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
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