Inactive User Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great chapter More soon xx Quote
suz22 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Loving this, the interaction between Brax and Casey is great, and I laughed when I read the chapter with Cheryl and the principle, sounded just like her!! Are you going to carry on with this after they arrive in the bay? Would be good if you did, maybe show scenes the show didn't, like the talk Brax had with Casey after being found in the car with Ruby, really wished they had shown that!! Hoping for an update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great update, Loved all the interactions between all the Braxtons!! Aww Heath!! The forgotten middle child!! I agree - it can't be long until the Braxton's hit the bay!! Please continue this story when you get up to them arriving in the bay!! Please!! More soon please Quote
marie_the_bee Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Casey is such a sweetheart Heath really doesn't know how to deal with his emotions..I feel sorry for him! Update soon please x Quote
Shezza Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 How sweet Mel saying Thank you to Casey. Poor Heath he doesn't know how to deal with his grief. I am enjoying this story I hope Charlie and Ruby are in it more soon Quote
Inactive User Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Great chapter More soon xx Quote
Arielxo Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Aww, Case is just the sweetest Poor Heath, he's in such a bad place at the moment. I hope someone is there to support Tracy. I feel so sorry for her ... Bitter-sweet chapter; looking forward to more Quote
soph1303 Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Great update, Aww!! Casey is such a sweetie !! Gotta love him!! Poor Heath, he's not in a good place at the moment is he??! More soon please Quote
Sazzle Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Really great story...properly feel for Heath. He's the bad boy type you just want to cuddle it out with Thank you for update, continuing to look forward to more. Love that you portray normal feelings so well Quote
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